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krystalreadz 's review for:
Fate Hollow Academy: Term 2
by Lyra Winters
DID NOT FINISH: 67%
I’m 65% in and if I read how cute she is in her fox form or how obsessed the MMCs are about how little she is one more time I will probably implode!
Everyone is apologizing and crying all the time! Seriously.. every chapter homegirl is crying and someone is apologizing for something. I’ve never seen “I’m sorry” in a book so much. Everyone has the perfect thing to say too and is just too quick to understanding. There’s no real conflict in the relationships. No grit to personalities.
And aside from Rhett, Alistair, and Rowan, everyone is written like teenagers. ESPECIALLY Kian and Wren. They speak and behave like young teenagers. The author makes it a point to say everyone is 21+ but she wrote very young characters. Saying they are in their 20s isn’t enough you’ve gotta have them behave that way too.
Also this would have been better off with 4-5 mates tops. 7 is too many and it’s obvious the author had no idea how to balance them all. We really only get significant page time with about 3.
Everyone is apologizing and crying all the time! Seriously.. every chapter homegirl is crying and someone is apologizing for something. I’ve never seen “I’m sorry” in a book so much. Everyone has the perfect thing to say too and is just too quick to understanding. There’s no real conflict in the relationships. No grit to personalities.
And aside from Rhett, Alistair, and Rowan, everyone is written like teenagers. ESPECIALLY Kian and Wren. They speak and behave like young teenagers. The author makes it a point to say everyone is 21+ but she wrote very young characters. Saying they are in their 20s isn’t enough you’ve gotta have them behave that way too.
Also this would have been better off with 4-5 mates tops. 7 is too many and it’s obvious the author had no idea how to balance them all. We really only get significant page time with about 3.