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Blades of Magic by Terah Edun
1.0

Was this book ever edited? (Kindle version) The whole story lacked a singular plot (where's the ending?), the characters are flat, the action boring, and the whole thing was trying to be something it wasn't. Also there were too many writing flaws (including technical), word choice fails, and dialogue problems. This is supposed to be a YA fantasy, but I got new adult feels and the language/jargon was modern that it felt like it was some sort of fantasy world, but during our modern times - I know even that is difficult to understand 'cause that's how lost I was. Just avoid this book altogether.