monicasnextchapter 's review for:

Blue by Danielle Steel

1.0

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I’m a little torn and confused on this. The story itself is fine. The writing however is absolutely horrible. It reads more like a research paper and so many details left out and big changes happening too nonchalantly from one sentence to another. It’s just so matter of fact and emotionless. From one sentence to another it could be a huge timeframe but no details. There was no flow from one thing to another, it just was. I was pretty shocked by that. This was my first Danielle Steel book and won’t be reading another if this is how she writes. There’s no structure or dialogue. Just thoughts, like a bullet point journal.
Also, wtf is with Becky in this book?!