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a11idond 's review for:
When the Moon Hatched
by Sarah A. Parker
dark
emotional
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
No
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
This book has NO CLIMAX. It basically serves as a bunch of info-dumping and poor world-building for whatever next book that’s actually going to start the action. The pacing is terrible. The writing is clunky, overly wordy, and often grammatically incorrect. It’s all telling instead of showing. The author overcomplicates everything in this world and crams in a bunch of random details and concepts that are never brought up again. This book was self-published and it was VERY obvious—no editors in sight. Don’t waste your time.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Animal cruelty, Mental illness, Physical abuse, Torture, Violence, Death of parent, Murder, Fire/Fire injury