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katietheman 's review for:
Knotty List
by Taylor Fox
DID NOT FINISH: 59%
DNF @ 59%
HOW is there 150 more pages after this??
The writing is juvenile and the storyline isn’t making sense. We’re jumping through chapters at random speeds and forgetting prior lore. At one point Krampus says “let me tell you about the masks” and spoiler alert, we never get the story.
The plot is very thin- which you can expect for erotica- but for the length, it’s a mess. There needed to be more characters in this because a few elves and fairies were not enough, leaving us with only Olivia and Krampus. Both of which I’m not understanding. Olivia starts this book as a door-mat people pleaser, so why all the sudden is she fighting back on everything Krampus says?? It’s out of character and there was no growth to get there. Krampus is just lowkey boring.
I thought maybe I could stick it out, but the plot is infuriating. 50% in there’s a random “she runs away” chapter, but NOTHING before this leads up to it?? It’s giving whiplash!
HOW is there 150 more pages after this??
The writing is juvenile and the storyline isn’t making sense. We’re jumping through chapters at random speeds and forgetting prior lore. At one point Krampus says “let me tell you about the masks” and spoiler alert, we never get the story.
The plot is very thin- which you can expect for erotica- but for the length, it’s a mess. There needed to be more characters in this because a few elves and fairies were not enough, leaving us with only Olivia and Krampus. Both of which I’m not understanding. Olivia starts this book as a door-mat people pleaser, so why all the sudden is she fighting back on everything Krampus says?? It’s out of character and there was no growth to get there. Krampus is just lowkey boring.
I thought maybe I could stick it out, but the plot is infuriating. 50% in there’s a random “she runs away” chapter, but NOTHING before this leads up to it?? It’s giving whiplash!