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DID NOT FINISH: 62%

"I remember nothing of my life on earth except all pop culture references which I make 80% of the time."

If the plot didn't repeat six times, I still probably would have given up. Just this line of dialog over and over:
"Why should I trust in you as a Dark Lord?"
"Because if you join me, I'll be kind of nice and definitely reenact the author's sexual fantasies with you."
"What? No shit, really? Sounds good to me."

Plus the time loop thing could have been fun but it pretty much took any stakes out of the story after the first ten percent.