A review by dmwhipp
Fate of Perfection by K.F. Breene

2.0

Absolutely ridiculous, over the top, sci-fi thriller..... not my style of book. The dialogue was like Princess Leia and Han Solo after overdosing on oysters... constant bickering and sexual banter. The hero (Ryker) and heroine (Millicent) hurtle around in futuristic vehicles and settings while toting a toddler (Marie) who apparently never gets hungry, wets her diaper, or throws tantrums. During the many chase scenes, I would sometimes forget Marie existed until a locked door was encountered and Marie's magic unlocking power was needed. While the premise deals with corporations seeking to perfect humans, the books hero is Ryker, who is constantly calling Millicent sweetheart, cupcake, and princess, when he's not too busy killing bad guys, making dick jokes, or talking about his sexual prowess. After meeting, Millicent and Ryker take an instant Harlequin romance dislike to each other that will inevitably lead to true love. When Millicent is selected to breed and injected with sperm, it takes about two seconds to figure out it will undoubtedly be Ryker who is the father. It read more like a comic book than a novel, but did somehow maintain a modicum of fun by not taking itself too seriously.