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A review by twistingsnake
With A Vengeance by Freydís Moon
Did not finish book. Stopped at 0%.
1) it is shocking to me that anyone believed a Hispanic author wrote this. It could not be more clear that this was written by a white woman. I was three pages in before being like “this is not grounded in any personal understanding of the culture and/or lived experience as a trans person. I don’t read call out posts because my time has value but the text clearly indicates this.
2) I wish these submissive author types put as much thought in their dom character and why’d they be attracted to/get something out of their relationship with someone so boring and utterly unremarkable. I understand that these works are FANTASY but can’t the dom be a character with wants and desires that aren’t perfectly aligned with who the author is? I just want a CRUMB of character.
3) I was fully planning on finishing
This but then they used the word snuff-fuck and I had to DNF
2) I wish these submissive author types put as much thought in their dom character and why’d they be attracted to/get something out of their relationship with someone so boring and utterly unremarkable. I understand that these works are FANTASY but can’t the dom be a character with wants and desires that aren’t perfectly aligned with who the author is? I just want a CRUMB of character.
3) I was fully planning on finishing
This but then they used the word snuff-fuck and I had to DNF