A review by rhcollins
The Many Lives of Fitzwilliam Darcy by Beau North, Brooke West

3.0

I love the premise of this, Darcy is forced to live his proposal day over and over again until he gets it right. The plot and story are done well, any questions you have about the fantasy are addressed in the narrative so you can stay in the story without questioning the believably of it. I did feel like the middle of the story dragged on. Yes, its going to take him a bit of time to realize how truly stuck he is in the timewarp, but I felt like it too him too many days before he started taking action into his own hands (in this way, Elizabeth Adams's story November 26th does this a bit better, Elizabeth quickly realizes that there must be a reason she's stuck in time and sets out to fix it). Overall a nice story.