A review by sunshinesusan
A Kingdom of Flame and Fury by Whitney Dean

Did not finish book. Stopped at 3%.

I can’t. The writing is awful, self-contradictory, and just so cringe. There is so much artless exposition cluttering it up that by 3% in, I already knew Raven’s entire backstory. I feel so tricked by the 4-star reviews, because the story is littered with mistakes a new writer and a bad editor would make. Like it’s just objectively bad. If you want an engaging fantasy that doesn’t sound like it was written by a thirteen-year-old, steer way clear of this one.