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Was way too wordy. Half way through the first chapter we covered 25 different things and I had already forgot what the stupid rule was. The foreword stole my patience for the rest of the book. I'm all for conversation but there is really something to be said about being short sweet and to the point. I gave up at the end of the 1st chapter.