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A review by terriaminute
Pros & Cons of Betrayal by A.E. Wasp
emotional
funny
hopeful
fast-paced
4.0
Fear and anger, lies and fears, round and round... This one's True Love long lost, and the reasons are intensely character-driven. I enjoyed it. And oh boy that epilogue!
However.
Kelpie Press needs to hire better line editors. There are missing words, but far worse, twice Ridge is referred to as Breck, and there are many instances of paragraphing fails during dialogues, which is even more confusing when there are more than two speakers. Tsk, I say. TSK.
However.
Kelpie Press needs to hire better line editors. There are missing words, but far worse, twice Ridge is referred to as Breck, and there are many instances of paragraphing fails during dialogues, which is even more confusing when there are more than two speakers. Tsk, I say. TSK.