starfish422 's review for:

The Gender Game by Bella Forrest
2.0

I bought the book because the plot sounded vaguely interesting and the Kindle edition was 99 cents. I didn’t overpay. I’ll admit to enjoying parts, particularly toward the end when the UST was reaching its peak. But Lee’s “letter to Desmond” was just bizarre. I think she’d have been better to leave it at Les starting to take off from the palace roof and leave her cliffhanger there.

If this manuscript was edited by paid editors, the publishing company needs to fire their contractors. Awful, stiffly constructed sentences that the editors should have caught and suggested changes.