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When the Moon Hatched by Sarah A. Parker
4.0
adventurous dark medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

At first, the plot was predictable. But then I realized it kinda had to be predictable, to set up the very unpredictable things to come. I am invested in the outcome of the characters, and I liked a lot of aspects about this new world (magic system isn’t surprising but nice; parchment larks are now my new favorite)
However, it’s my belief that the author is trying a bit too hard. I understand including new words, but not everything needs a new word in a new world (idk why we can’t just say “room” instead of “slumber suite”). 
I read this on Kindle, and the title cards for the diary entries, character name for the chapter, and any images (like a letter or something) were very difficult if not impossible to read. 
This was really enjoyable, and I’m excited for the next book. 

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