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Can't Resist Her
by Kianna Alexander
I did not finish this. I hit page 40 and started to think I could be reading something better.
Found in my read that the dialogue was rather boring and far too much like an interview between the characters.
The intro between Summer and Aiko was awkward as hell to read and felt too forced and too soon. In the flash back there was no need to have the idea of some mysterious person only know as Blue, because a few paragraphs before it mentions summer by name. I thought the flash back was from Aiko's perspective and she was meant to not know who it was, but the writing broke that idea with revealing Summer.
On top of that, after the flash back Summer was the one space casing like she was the one having the flash back. It just seemed at that point I was reading a mashed up draft of the book.
I think the book would have done better focusing on just Summers perspective. Then maybe I would care and have a better insight about why the school is so important to her. Other than having a superficial acknowledgment of why, but no care beyond that. I'm not invested in Summer's plight to save this school because she honestly does not seem to understand why it's happening. If the place has been unused makes sense to scrap it.
This book could be really good, it sounded by the blurb that it would be good. Unfortunately it just didn't hit the spot.
Found in my read that the dialogue was rather boring and far too much like an interview between the characters.
The intro between Summer and Aiko was awkward as hell to read and felt too forced and too soon. In the flash back there was no need to have the idea of some mysterious person only know as Blue, because a few paragraphs before it mentions summer by name. I thought the flash back was from Aiko's perspective and she was meant to not know who it was, but the writing broke that idea with revealing Summer.
On top of that, after the flash back Summer was the one space casing like she was the one having the flash back. It just seemed at that point I was reading a mashed up draft of the book.
I think the book would have done better focusing on just Summers perspective. Then maybe I would care and have a better insight about why the school is so important to her. Other than having a superficial acknowledgment of why, but no care beyond that. I'm not invested in Summer's plight to save this school because she honestly does not seem to understand why it's happening. If the place has been unused makes sense to scrap it.
This book could be really good, it sounded by the blurb that it would be good. Unfortunately it just didn't hit the spot.