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Veiled by Benedict Jacka
3.0

Things are getting very interesting.

A Dark Mage in the Council? Traitors with the Keepers? Alex being threatened by a Light Mage? Very interesting and a bit scary.

Even though, this part feels a bit like a filler part and a set up for things to come. That's not necessarily a bad thing but it made reading this part a bit disappointing.

I'm very curious what's going to be happen with Luna. That one comment from Chalice regarding her? I'm choosing to interpret it that way that Luna might be a Mage after all. :)

I'm looking forward to the next part. :)