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Trying To Live With The Dead by B.L. Brunnemer
3.0

It’s the kind of writing where there are too many sentences that begin with pronouns where prepositional phrases or conjunctions would go a long way in making the writing more seamless so a paragraph doesn’t read like a list but one immersive event.

I also had to check the description multiple times while reading to ensure this is a RH when there’s insta-acceptance and protectiveness but no overt attraction? It was almost uncomfortable to have them all pursue other relationships and felt like infidelity, even if it’s just to their future selves based on the romantic relationship development we’re anticipating.