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A review by dgil
Eleventh Cycle by Kian N. Ardalan
Did not finish book. Stopped at 23%.
I really wanted to like this. I love Berserk and Dark Souls, the world seemed interesting, and I like the idea of checking out a self-published novel.
I spent most of the 180 or so pages I read wishing I could whip out a red pen and clean up the writing. There are typos, misused words, and grammatical errors on almost every page. I don’t understand why you would right a whole novel and not proofread it. I am genuinely confused by all the 5 star reviews I have seen on this, booktube, and goodreads.
I spent most of the 180 or so pages I read wishing I could whip out a red pen and clean up the writing. There are typos, misused words, and grammatical errors on almost every page. I don’t understand why you would right a whole novel and not proofread it. I am genuinely confused by all the 5 star reviews I have seen on this, booktube, and goodreads.