keroseberry 's review for:

Not in My Book by Katie Holt

2.0

slow-paced

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So, it’s not that the writing is bad or anything, but this book pissed me off. The FMC was annoying and her thought process about their relationship made 0 sense to me. A lot of their issues and character development didn’t really make sense. The MMC was a huge dick in the third act break up—to such extent that I was doubting he could bounce back in my eyes—and I was right. Weak apology. It just didn’t do it for me. Decent spice, though.