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The Face on the Milk Carton by Caroline B. Cooney
0.5
adventurous mysterious reflective slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

Overall, just bad. I've read many self-published works better. The writing is just childish and awkward. The idea isn't terrible (that's what got the half star), but the execution is severely lacking. I lost count of formatting and grammar errors, which made the immersion even more difficult. The ending felt like a copout and didn't leave me satisfied.

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