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Gold by Chris Cleave
4.0

3.5 stars rounded up to 4 stars.

Gold is about two women cyclists who are training for the 2012 Olympics and who also happen to be best friends. One, Kate, has a daughter with leukemia; the other, Zoe, has intense hang-ups.

Cleave's writing has really improved and it's noticeable. His prose has better flow and he can alternate points of view without rupturing that flow. I do think he hasn't mastered character voice, as many of the characters sounded the same (except for Tom and Sophie). Overall, Cleave has vastly improved over [b:Incendiary|10118117|Incendiary|Chris Cleave|http://d.gr-assets.com/books/1320532685s/10118117.jpg|688038], and even [b:Little Bee|6948436|Little Bee|Chris Cleave|http://d.gr-assets.com/books/1344401905s/6948436.jpg|4126074]. I did find the pacing to be a bit slow, though
-- the book builds up to the two women racing each other for a spot at the Olympics instead of the actual Games
.

As for the characters, I liked them all, but they were not overly descriptive. I think the coach, Tom, was the most fleshed out; whereas, with Zoe and Kate I'm confident I can describe them in one word. It's true that they get more dynamic as the story goes along, but I just don't think their characterization was as nuanced as it could have been.

I liked the ending, which I didn't think was overly sentimental compared to Cleave's first two books. I also really liked the glimpses into the pasts of characters, Tom and Kate especially.