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A review by bookish08
Knot for a Moment by Devyn Sinclair, Devyn Sinclair
3.0
I don’t I think like this one quite as much as the previous 2 in this series. It wasn’t bad though. It just felt rushed and some plot points could have been flushed out better. The whole Ian thing was just weird. It didn’t make sense why he would do that and unrealistic that he’d even be able to. The whole story takes place over a very short amount of time which also felt unauthentic. I have no problem with scent matches and the insta-love from that, but had the story stretched over a longer period of time, there could have been more character/relationship development. Also, while I like the spicy scenes, sometimes less is more. I don’t need a page full of adjectives and analogies…shorten that down and give more page time to the characters/plot. Half the reason the spicy scenes are hot is because we fall in love with the MMC first.