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58 reviews
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.75
However, I think that I stopped enjoying the book as much when she killed
The sections where we learnt more about her backstory felt like they dragged on too long too. I understand that a good portion of it was necesary to understand her motivations and build up to the ending, but I just found myself waiting for those sections to be over to get back to the interesting parts of the book.
The ending felt like a huge let down too.
Characters: 4/10 x2
Atmosphere: 5/10
Writing: 5/10 x2
Plot: 6/10 x2
Intrigue: 6/10
Logic: 6/10
Enjoyment: 4/10 x3
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Characters: 6/10
Atmosphere: 7/10
Writing: 4/10
Plot: 5/10
Intrigue: 4/10
Logic: 6/10
Enjoyment: 5/10
Graphic: Eating disorder, Mental illness, and Alcohol
Moderate: Suicidal thoughts and Sexual harassment
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
I loved the worldbuilding and the mystery surrounding the Pits and the author's descriptions were so interesting. The Pits were so mysterious and spooky and there was a creepy energy the entire time the characters were in them! The characters are very intriguing and I constantly wanted to learn more about them too! The characters are diverse but in a way that feels perfectly natural and makes complete sense within the story and their individual stories and perspectives are so interesting and cause a beautiful level of conflict between them.
The ending
Overall, I loved this book and I will be (im)patiently waiting for the sequel! Though I do think the ending to this book is complete enough that it is satisfying to read by itself, there are amazing plot points that will be picked up in the second part that I cannot wait for!
Characters: 9/10
Atmosphere: 10/10
Writing: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Intrigue: 10/10
Logic: 9/10
Enjoyment: 10/10
Graphic: Animal death, Body horror, Child abuse, Chronic illness, Gun violence, Violence, Blood, Medical content, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Grief, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Moderate: Animal cruelty, Gun violence, Misogyny, Stalking, and Colonisation
Minor: Ableism, Addiction, Cursing, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Homophobia, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Suicide attempt, Lesbophobia, Fire/Fire injury, and Alcohol
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.25
- Near the begining of the book there's a vague reference to the main character being a gold star lesbian, which is stated to be a good thing. This is incredibly gross, transphobic, and just all around exclusionary.
- The main character is written without any flaws and is rather conceited, which to an extent is fine, but I found annoying.
- There is an extreme emphasis on masc/femme relationships, with it kinda coming across like those are the only valid relationships. This is incredibly exclusionary and its weird to be applying hetero relationship standards to non-hetero relationships.
- The descriptions of the locations were interesting, but they were far too long and detailed. I didn't feel like I needed a thorough interior decoration lesson each time we moved rooms.
- At some point in the book there is also a bit where the main character mentions that most women she's encountered have never had a real orgasm before and she's the only one who can give it to them. This just feels incredibly egotistical and weird.
- I really didn't enjoy the amount of spiritualism in this book and it made every sex scene hard to read, this may not be a problem for everyone, I just don't vibe with that kind of stuff and it was so heavily intertwined within the book that I couldn't ignore it
- One of the plot points in the book is that
the main character is upset that Flourish is having sex with The Shiek, even though there was an early point where the main character talked about setting boundaries on their relationship because Flourish was too possessive and one of the main rules of the society is that there are no exclusive relationships allowed. I don't understand how the main character could be upset at Flourish when she herself went and had sex with many other women in the book. - The way that the characters talk to each other doesn't feel very natural, and the way the conversations were written meant that I found it difficult to keep track of who was saying what, especially if there was more than two people involved
I also later discovered that the book was self edited, and I think that explains a lot of my issues with the book. If this book had a good, strict editor to help the writer iron out a lot of these issues, I really think I would have liked this book a lot more. As it currently stands, I really didn't enjoy this book and I'm glad I'm done with it.
Characters: 2/10
Atmosphere: 4/10
Writing: 2/10
Plot: 3/10
Intrigue: 1/10
Logic: 4/10
Enjoyment: 2/10
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.0
I also struggle to understand why this is marketed as a cinderella retelling, like I get that calling it a cinderella retelling would make it more marketable, but this story doesn't make sense to me as a cinderella story.
I don't think I will continue with this series, especially with the number of books there are.
Characters: 4/10
Atmosphere: 7/10
Writing: 4/10
Plot: 4/10
Intrigue: 3/10
Logic: 6/10
Enjoyment: 3/10
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
Characters: 9/10
Atmosphere: 10/10
Writing: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Intrigue: 9/10
Logic: 9/10
Enjoyment: 10/10
Graphic: Gun violence
Moderate: Homophobia
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Characters - 7.5/10
Atmosphere/Setting - 7.25/10
Writing - 7.25/10
Plot - 8.75/10
Intrigue - 7.75/10
Logic - 8.5/10
Enjoyment - 7.75/10
Graphic: Bullying, Cursing, Deadnaming, Drug use, Hate crime, Racism, Sexism, Sexual content, Transphobia, Outing, Abandonment, Alcohol, and Classism
Moderate: Alcoholism, Biphobia, Homophobia, Misogyny, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual assault, Medical content, Stalking, Lesbophobia, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Addiction, Vomit, Police brutality, Medical content, Religious bigotry, and Acephobia/Arophobia
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
I did find the case(s) intriguing and I wanted to know who the culprit was and how they did it, but I didn't find myself racing to get back to this book. I do think it is possibly aimed at an older reader which is not a fault of the book, but rather just a bad fit for me.
Overall, I don't think I will return to Michael Connelly's work again, but it was interesting to try out.
Characters - 5/10
Atmosphere/Setting - 6/10
Writing - 4.5/10
Plot - 7.25/10
Intrigue - 4.75/10
Logic - 8/10
Enjoyment - 3.5/10
4.0
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
I'm really glad that the writer has more books in this series and I can't wait to get my hands on them!
Characters - 9/10
Atmosphere/Setting - 6.5/10
Writing - 10/10
Plot - 8.5/10
Intrigue - 9/10
Logic - 7/10
Enjoyment - 9/10
Graphic: Addiction, Adult/minor relationship, Animal cruelty, Animal death, Body shaming, Bullying, Confinement, Death, Drug abuse, Drug use, Infidelity, Mental illness, Physical abuse, Racism, Rape, Self harm, Suicide, Vomit, Kidnapping, Grief, Stalking, Murder, and Alcohol
Moderate: Addiction, Alcoholism, Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Eating disorder, Emotional abuse, Gore, Pedophilia, Rape, Sexual assault, Suicidal thoughts, Toxic relationship, Medical content, Dementia, Death of parent, Gaslighting, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail