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The Perfect Affair by Angela Henry
2.0
The book had great potential, but overall all felt clunky and flat. The first 20% of the book felt strong - but then it seemed to lose what to book was actually about after that.
It didn't get me invested, it didn't motivate me to first the book to see whodunnit, and it felt like the author thought if they threw in as many curveballs and crazy plot points, the book would be great.
I personally think the book needed more time in the Beta stage to look at the flow and the pacing of the novel. A lot of the time, it was one giant paragraph that could have been split into three or four smaller ones.
The sex scene that was shown was flat, and choppy with the wording. I gave it a .25 spice rating as a warning for a semi-explicit attempt.
By the time I was 50% through the book, I wanted to just finish the book for the sake of finishing.
It didn't get me invested, it didn't motivate me to first the book to see whodunnit, and it felt like the author thought if they threw in as many curveballs and crazy plot points, the book would be great.
I personally think the book needed more time in the Beta stage to look at the flow and the pacing of the novel. A lot of the time, it was one giant paragraph that could have been split into three or four smaller ones.
The sex scene that was shown was flat, and choppy with the wording. I gave it a .25 spice rating as a warning for a semi-explicit attempt.
By the time I was 50% through the book, I wanted to just finish the book for the sake of finishing.