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DNF rtc!

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22.10.2024

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dnf + on hold for now

the meet cute was something but it was NOT it for me

2 stars for the effort !
rtc !!

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24.10.2024

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maryam rated this : 1 star

20.09.2024-03.10.2024

1 star is too generous for this.

Note to future maryam : please don’t torture yourself again, love. Choose happiness not trauma and zade meadows.

Also i yap a lot here but i was born to yap <3

Oh yall seriously gave me so much clout because of this shit my notifs were burning on the daily so thank you lmao !!

Also a lot of yall commented that you enjoyed my suffering. Glad my suffering was a form of entertainment (?)

Hate review

Warning : if you liked this book, good for you, but don’t go around trying to pick up a fight with me , i’ll respect your opinions if you respect mine. I don’t have the mental capacity to deal with you , since that was wasted reading this book.



Trigger warnings: rape , abuse, stalker , dark romance , zade meadows. If these topics make you uncomfortable please do not read this review. You have been warned. yes zade meadows himself is a trigger warning but i’ll get to that later



overall thoughts
Who allowed this to be published ????? As soon as i read the author’s note i knew this was a mistake i regretted my decision it was crazy if ykyk. Okay so giving how shitty this book was and how i hated it , i can say it provided entertainment and trauma i am not going to lie. I kind of blame myself because my dumbass read it but boy oh boy do i have a lot to say. First of all , I would like to applaud myself for reading this and surviving this like I ate so hard fr. Okay now let’s actually get into it, First of all the fact that someone can write a romance about stalking is beyond me, and the fact that some of y’all romanticizing it is actually fucking insane. Before i get attacked I would like to make this very clear some people who enjoy this book don’t support the actions in it. Okay so let’s get into why this is wrong in so many ways before some of y’all say but this is fiction yes i know it is but we shouldn’t be promoting it i won’t be funny in this topic since this is a very serious topic

Romanticising stalking is one of the most disgusting things i have ever seen, the amount of women and men who get kidnapped , the amount of people who go missing , the amount of people who become scarred because such of a thing is insane; and the the fact that some of yall are romanticising it like hello ? these people suffered while you are literally ROMANTICISING IT. Go to therapy and get a fucking grip. In Fact i will pay for your therapy myself.


Rape. Rape is disgusting in anyway shape or form. I know adeline was enjoying it but it still doesn’t justify zade’s actions. And adeline is a dumbfuck for enjoying it. I know that she tried to push him away at first but then she suddenly decided that she enjoyed it and let him do it. Like Adeline, I'm sending you to therapy with those who are romanticising it.


How this effect’s people’s dipshit’s brains: I was scrolling on my fyp and i came across a video of some girl simping over zade meadows that by itself is an issue but not as big as the one that happened in the comment section i remember someone commenting that this would all be different if zade was ugly and the creator replied then thank god he’s hot and the commenter replied with oh so if he’s hot we can justify his actions and the creator said yes that’s fine i don’t mind adeline’s scenario happening to me if a hot man did it. Literally take a second to process that I literally can’t with people.




characters

Adeline: sigh where do i begin with her. If you thought paedyn gray from powerless was a horrible fmc take a look at our lovely Adeline riley here ! Ngl while i was reading this i was like there is no way she’ll be more insufferable than padeyn and i was completely wrong. Infact let me apologise to paedyn gray for even comparing her to Adeline so now Adeline replaces paedyn in first place for fmc’s i hate the most. Okay so let’s start with why i hated Adeline so much. First of all , she literally has a stalker. She reported it to the police once and I know zade deleted the files or someshit but then she literally remained silent and didn’t tell anyone except daya or whatever her name was. She didn’t tell her mother , didn’t try reaching out to the fbi to track him down she just stayed like the dumbfuck she was and made zade raper her and stalk her , like no way you’re that desperate. Another thing is inviting random men in the middle of the night to her house like what ? and then one time where she said she takes pictures of her naked self just because she thinks she has great body proportions. What ???? I mean i’m all for confident fmc’s but that was absolutely disgusting and unnecessary like what the actual fuck ? She tried to push zade away which i applaud her for but then started enjoying this and let him do whatever ??? again i would like to apologise to paedyn gray i am so sorry for thinking you were the worst fmc but don’t worry you’re still number 2 !



Zade: He wanted to be the door from unhinged except the door was innocent and lowkey fine like shout out to drys. Petition for the door to teach zade some actual decency and how to actually be fine please. I will kidnap zade and abuse him until he learns some fucking descency. And if i see anyone commenting on how i prefer the door over zade, the door actually had character. Okay i heard zade was crazy but i didn’t expect THIS level of crazy this mf was so insane I genuinely had to take a few laps around my room whenever i read his chapters, i’m actually being serious.No but zade’s existence was a comedy because tfym “Don’t feel guilty, baby. I don’t make idle threats, so consider this lesson learnt.” My guy really thought he was hot while doing this no no zade no you were actually hilarious asf ngl the texts don’t even get me started on those LMAO. The dialogue between him and his little mouse is a whole nother story. Okay let me get into the things zade did !

Stalking we can all agree that stalker romances are shit and so are stalkers fictional or not it is wrong so very wrong, i’m not going to explain why it’s wrong since yall are smart enough to acknowledge that i hope




Okay so sending the hand’s of a man who slept with the woman you love, even though she doesn’t love you back is insane to me like read that sentence again help.




Okay the gun scene i will not elaborate on this since it was to disgusting but he literally f-ed her with a gun like the fuck


Another point i would like to add is taping her mouth and tying her to her bed. If you don’t think theres anything wrong with this then off to therapy you go.




Okay so i would love to hate more on this man so enjoy !!
Okay so more on this man bitch he apparently has this business sort of thing where he saves kids from rape and abuse and whatever which the author probably added to justify his shitty actions and some of yall actually went with it like i was so shocked when i found people defending him just for raping adeline just because he saved children from rape and killed rapists like what the actual fuck ? rape is still wrong wether the person is 26 years old or a child. Zade’s just doing the same thing the men who were murdered by him did but in a different font. Zade literally made my blood pressure rise to the point that i thought i would be dead by half way through or at the end anyways i survived
“I’m a survivor i’m not gon give up” - destiny’s child
Did i give you a throwback ?


Let’s get into the quotes aka trauma

“My hunt isn’t over. I still have to play with my little mouse now.”

“Sneaking off with random men, little mouse? If i catch his hands anywhere near you, they’ll end up in your mailbox by morning,”

“Can’t have my little mouse thinking there’s no consequences for letting another man touch what’s mine.” OKAY ALPHA

“The only predator i’ll allow in her house is me.” so romantic

And like arctic monkeys said : Perhaps fuck off might be too kind. Perhaps fuck might be too kind.” This lyric was literally me throughout this whole book.

Post - torture : never torturing myself again...be prepared for a one of kind hate review

The title of the next book is called hunting adeline and i know i said i don’t want to traumatise myself but maybee just maybeee since yall really enjoyed my suffering.

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buddy read with my loves : dream , shania
, april , avah
get ready to watch a bunch of teenage girls have fun get traumatized !!

જ⁀➴ 3.5 stars

on hold - to continue after my finals are over

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14.11.2024

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