I like how this book doesn't take itself seriously, but it definitely isn't a tight story—though maybe what felt like droning filler to me will feel like immersive world building to someone else! Everyone's got different tastes :)
The world is interesting but the character motivations aren't fully developped, and the romance collapses into an undeserved happy ending. The first protagonist, Bremmin, completely falls apart the second — not the second someone does something truly heartfelt for him, or helps him grow as a character — but the second someone manages to pull the strings he tries so hard to hide. He starts off as a fairly solid self-respecting man, but by the end of the book has completely transformed into a cookie cutter doey eyed malleable romance hero. Velise, the other protagonist, even if by the end she does claim to love him, there's no sense that that isn't only because of what he can give to her, and I'm left with the impression that her love only means that she would briedly hesitate before abandoning him. Refusing to use a safeword during BDSM play is a huge red flag. I like reading books like this because they give a good although not self-aware insight into relationship dynamics, and can reveal certain patterns in both myself and other people that by seeing clealry I can better navigate, but I really wouldn't say that anything about this story is romantic. Romantic in a self-destructive sense, if nothing else. I guess some peole are into that.
intricately elaborate, well orchestrated, and a little bit outlandish. the research that went into this book is incredible, and I was ravenous to find out how the plot would unfold. I wasn't blown away by the characters, and the story might not be True—but it's a lot of fun.