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116 reviews
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.5
Again, Ware is good at setting up a plot but she gets so wrapped up in making sure there are twists and turns that her details don’t always pan out and her characters don’t seem believable or worse, she makes up new traits or details that she mushes in last minute to fill in the holes but make zero sense with the characters we’re trying to get to know and invest ourselves in.
Speaking of the characters, all of them (sans Tom) are AWFUL. I really stopped caring about what happened to any of them because they were all just the worst.
Her writing of Flo also felt mean spirited and fatphobic. Like we get it. She’s wearing clothes that would only look good on apparent waif goddess Clare. You don’t need to keep talking about Flo’s “rolls” or “excess skin.”
Nora as a POV character was frustrating because she really wasn’t sympathetic. Yes,
I also don’t buy for even a second that Nora was ever an actress let alone the understudy for the lead role in a play like Cat on a Hot Tin Roof. Whether she was up Clare’s ass as a teenager or not, there’s no way someone that shy and awkward and who HATED attention would have even auditioned. This sounds like a petty gripe but I’m pointing it out because it seems like the author liked the idea of Nora and James falling in love while starring in the school play together even if it made ZERO sense for the characters. This is far from the only instance of this but it’s a noticeable one. That’s a problem to me. An author should have a better grasp on characterization.
Another example is that Nora is supposedly a successful crime novelist. Okay, fine. But this is only briefly mentioned once at the beginning of the book (and again if she was so successful, you’d think the other characters would have heard of her or her books), she shows ZERO signs of being able to solve any kind of mystery or be good at reading people (or having really any other kind of skill that you think would make for a successful mystery author) until suddenly at the very end when the explanation for everything is shoe-horned in and the killer is revealed.
The “how” and “why” of the murder at the center of all of this also feel a bit messy. There’s some gaping plot holes in how the killer was able to pull everything off and the reasoning behind it just also feels weirdly childish and doesn’t line up with the character we met (despite the author insisting on it by having characters go “Ah, yes! Of COURSE!” again and again at each reveal).
I know it sounds like I hated this book. I really didn’t. It was entertaining and a breeze to get through. I just am disappointed when I see an author with such potential sort of flounder a bit. I’d say this is a good Beach read or cozy rainy weekend read but I don’t think this book was memorable enough or good enough for me to ever really think of again once I’m done posting this review.
Graphic: Gun violence, Murder
Moderate: Gore, Suicide, Suicide attempt, Toxic friendship
Minor: Fatphobia, Abortion, Pregnancy
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.5
It just was so, so bad.
First of all, the author did zero research about Greek mythology. She knew the bare bones (Hades is God of the Underworld, Persephone is Demeter’s daughter, etc.) but wasted so many opportunities to incorporate mythology and instead just kept reaching for the lowest hanging fruit. This extends to her world-building which was just so unbelievably dull and also didn’t fully make sense. It’s mentioned like ONCE that Hades owns a coffee shop called I believe The Café. Why would Hades own a coffee shop? Aphrodite has a competing nightclub to Hades’ called La Rose. Groundbreaking. They live in a city called New Athens. Yawn. Everything feels like a shapeless gray blob instead of full of life or originality.
The biggest issue of the book was of course, Persephone. She’s whiny, needy, and just so deeply foolish but because she’s a Mary Sue, we’re supposed to think she’s perfect at everything and so brave! and headstrong! and a bad bitch yas queen slay! There’s zero chemistry between her and Hades (more on that later). She’s both a student (who never goes to school) and has an “internship” at a news outlet where she’s literally told she can write whatever and get top billing with zero critiques or limits. I don’t think the author knows what an internship is…or what a journalist does. Also WHY is Persephone a journalist? Is it just because that’s the romance heroine job du jour? Because she’s awful at it. Her first assignment and she’s sleeping with her subject and allowing her feelings for him (good or bad, depending on her mood) to cloud her abilities to tell an honest story. And again, she is PRAISED for this. We’re supposed to believe she’s this phenomenal “investigative journalist” (who has the savvy and investigatory senses of a doorknob) even though she had literally no idea what she’s doing. Also apparently she has a passion for baking that only comes up like once. Which is wild because that makes more sense for the Goddess of Spring! Baking and creating things is a more logical career choice than “investigative journalist.”
There are zero real stakes here because the magical elements (including gods and goddesses’ true forms) keep being neglected until necessary for the plot. So many of the gods and goddesses seem pretty powerless. Why set your story in “a modern Ancient mythological Greece” if you’re not going to do literally anything with that aspect of your story?
Also what IS the setting? Real world places and people don’t exist in this world but both Clash of the Titans movies do? What?
And Persephone can only become a true goddess and unlock her powers after being dicked down by Hades? How is that empowering for this allegedly plucky, brave heroine who keeps insisting she doesn’t need him or his help yet literally can’t accomplish ANYTHING unless Hades (or his dick) does it for her?
I truly could go on and on and on about why this book is such a hot mess. I guess the sex scenes were okay? Standard and no different than what you’d find on r/dirtypenpals but they’re not Fifty Shades level awful.
Idk I wanted to like this but I’m just going to reread Lore Olympus (which I can not overstate was what this book is almost a direct copy of only well written and with a genuinely beautiful love story at the middle of it).
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.0
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Definitely sucks you in and makes you want to read more! A very inventive way of handling time travel and other sci-fi cliches.
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
t seems like Collins had to go back on quite a bit in order to make this narrative fit in with what she already told us in the original trilogy.
I’d say that some other issues with this book are that most of the characters are just…flat. Dr. Gaul with her ridiculous nursery rhymes is too cartoonish of a villain, Lucy Gray is a manic pixie dream girl (which on the one hand makes sense because we’re seeing her from Snow’s POV, but that doesn’t make her any less grating), the rest of the Covey and their weird country bumpkin way of life are equally as grating and Snow himself has zero shades of gray. He’s awful all the way through (I’ll get back to this).
The most interesting characters by far are Sejanus Plinth and Dean Highbottom, both of whom I kind of wish had been the POV characters for this prequel.
BUT I will say that in terms of politics and big picture ideas, this book is way more ambitious than the original trilogy. Yes, Snow is a bit one note but I *do* actually appreciate that. He’s a fascist, point blank. He’s an elitist bigot whose family has fallen on hard luck but we don’t ever have to feel sympathy for him because he STILL clings to that bigotry even though it’s glaringly obvious that The Capitol is to blame for his family’s trauma. It’s also VERY interesting that Collins doesn’t even attempt to hide the links between fascism and misogyny.
And Collins making it abundantly obvious that Coriolanus doesn’t truly LOVE Lucy Gray but seeks to own and possess her is actually really great. There’s no love story here. We know Lucy Gray is doomed from the moment she’s in his clutches. He wouldn’t have done ANYTHING for her if he didn’t want to fuck her so badly tbh. This was so obviously going to end one way and I’m glad that Collins didn’t chicken out and went for it and avoided giving him a change of heart although I wish she wasn’t so ambiguous with it.
The ending as a whole was another issue for me. It felt a bit rushed and convoluted and I wish Snow’s meeting with Highbottom was stretched out just a little more as opposed to stuffed into the epilogue.
All in all though, this was a solid read and I’m sure I’ll be seeing the movie in the Fall. I’m curious if Collins will be expanding even further on this world or not…
Graphic: Child abuse, Child death, Confinement, Death, Genocide, Gore, Gun violence, Hate crime, Misogyny, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Police brutality, Medical trauma, Suicide attempt, Murder, Colonisation, War, Injury/Injury detail, Classism
Moderate: Ableism, Addiction, Animal cruelty, Body horror, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Medical content, Trafficking, Gaslighting
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.5
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0