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- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
There are so many issues (the rape is extremely graphic, the fatphobia (internalized and external), the misogyny and sexism a lot of it from the main love interest 🥴🥴, the random remarks about the Deep South (like the comment about the football players being lined up like plantation slaves to their owner who has just died……). I mean I know this was the 90s but WHEW. But there are also things where SEP and s ahead of her time: support of queer and gay people, mentioning people with AIDs as being left behind with the main character working with them, befriending, donating. Like they are her friends not people she pities. The idea that women are more than just pure/madonna or bimbos. The idea that Black young men who are athletic are taken for their abilities but their intellects are completely disregarded and not fostered. Now is there some white saviorism in here? Sure. But again, I think a lot of it is a product of the 90s.
I love Phoebe. I used to love Dan in a nostalgic way. But yall he is a mess and needs to grovel and change in order to be good enough for her. And the jump scare of him messing with a 16 year old (he’s not it’s kinky games with his ex wife) really got me this time 😂😂.
Overall I think this book needs to be looked at as a reflection of the mess and problems of the 90s, but also as a book that really started the sports romance genre. And also SEP really is one of the early starters of a super messed up man who is problematic and misogynistic but just needs the love of a good woman to change him. Like the alpha man stuff started with her.
Graphic: Sexism, Sexual harassment, and Misogyny
Moderate: Violence, Rape, and Homophobia
Minor: Racism
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
I wasn’t super sold on the “lust at first sites” vibes but what I think it is is more about two people who are so hard shelled, grieving, lonely, finding an immediate understanding. Seeing each other. And that really becomes clear as the story goes on.
And this is a romance but it is also a story about sisters. And utterly broken and lonely people.
“I’m always going to have your heart, Jessie. Because you gave it to me so completely, and yours taught me how to make my own. But I think—I think I need to give yours back to you now. I think you need it, because I think it’s high time you get to share it with someone else.”
GOOD FUCKING LORD.
Graphic: Abandonment
Moderate: Death, Suicide, and Mental illness
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
I knew there was SA within the first 15% but goodness I didn’t know it was going to be that graphic or horrible to read. There should be a huge CW and it was one of the reasons why I didn’t want to read this. The misogyny and sexism she faces is horrible, and although I’m sure it’s realistic it’s actually hard to read. I also think the cover and marketing made this seem like a romance but it 100% is not - the Romance is there but so minimal and actually really sad because there is partner death. The romance parts are great but it is not a romance by any means. What this book is is a portrait of grief. Just absolute sadness beyond belief.
I would be remiss if I didn’t say that I cried. Some of the parts when she was talking about tv importance of motherhood and what women do, never letting anyone tell you you can’t do something. Putting yourself first, giving yourself a moment. As a mom, that shit was my catnip and I loved it. But I do wish it was more intersectional cuz the one Rosa Parks comment, as if to say “Lizzie can’t be racist!!! She supports the civil rights movement” was lazy imo.
And then there’s 6:30. Which like a talking dog???? Idk. I loved him and also I was like wtf.
The last thing I’ll say is that u have seen some folks say that Elizabeth is autistic but that actually is never stated and idk if the author has said that. I think she read autistic but it doesn’t feel like a story about autism is that makes sense. I’m going to seek out perspectives from autistic reviewers.
Graphic: Rape, Sexual assault, Grief, Death, Death of parent, and Sexism
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
Graphic: Sexual violence, Death, Sexual assault, and Suicide
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Yulin has tension throughout the book in a way that is literally heart pounding. Whether it's the tension of their hatred toward each other in the beginning, turning into the tension of will they/won't they (that couch scene alone with the fingers truly messed me up I was RIVETED), into the tension of how Helen would be able to have Grant and also not disappoint her parents. It felt like a thriller: just emotions on a rollercoaster, sweaty anxiety matched with sweaty swoony. Once Grant and Helen start to figure out their feelings, things seem smooth but they are anything but.
I loved Helen: stoic, scared but not able to show it. She felt like externally someone people would call emotionless but because we were in her head we knew she feels every little thing. "You feel a lost of responsibility for other people's feelings." WHEW. I mean Helen's feelings about her sister alone could be a whole book. She is DEEP and feels so deeply, but sometimes doesn't seem able to allow herself to. And Grant: grieving the accidental death he caused, unable to fully show people his true self, but only showing a mask. I don't think I've seen grief portrayed in this way, so differently, by two main characters. Just absolutely beautiful.
And the writing? Absolutely stunning. "
What more can I say?
Graphic: Child death and Death
Moderate: Car accident and Grief
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
I absolutely loved their beginning meeting and how they clicked. It gave credence to their entire relationship. And the tension that they both felt about falling in love???? The stuff great books are made from. I will say the slow burn was SLOW. Like 70% before they kiss is WILD.
My two issues:
- no way he is a virgin and can do all that stuff
- the third act breakup and him not fighting for her to his brother.
Graphic: Mental illness
Moderate: Child death
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
I didn’t love Daphne in this. Or Hugo really either - also he plays a way bigger part than the blurb suggest. Jake is the best. But this book is also sad while not making me cry even close to her other books, I think because I felt so disconnected from the story. I wanted to love it and I read it in 2 days. But I’m so annoyed by it and especially by how it ended.
lastly, there is a strange mention about Israel which I still haven’t quite puzzled through. “We’ve always been reform but over the years my mother got more and more progressive and now their temple has thinks like namaSHVITZ yoga, head blessings, and curiously uniform feelings about Israel”
Graphic: Medical trauma
Moderate: Death
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
I also just had a few not so great language issues: Melanie is supposed to be plus sized but says she “north of a size ten” which is still straight sized. The camping scene was so cringe and you can’t convince me she’d be in tip top sex shape within 2 days. Also the Ian kid was horribly creepy and idk why he was in so much of the book! Like talk about not understanding boundaries that’s horrifying.
*I started this review rating it at a 3 but keep going down and down lol*
Unfortunately this book just wasn’t for me.
Graphic: Abandonment
Moderate: Death and Death of parent
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
What I liked:
- parts of the world and magic system
- Finn - y’all be prepared that it takes AGES for him to be introduced but he’s what saved this
- parts of the ending (but it was so rushed)
- the library scenes felt like a book readers dream
- the diversity, the fact that these were all Black fae (although I’m still unsure what constitutes a light fae vs dark fae)
What I didn’t like:
- parts of this felt like Mac and the Fever series but not as good - the whole grimoire stuff was too similar without the depth
- the romance is actually so cringe. It’s like a YA that tries to be NA. The sex scene actually made me uncomfortable and felt hemmed in there to give some “spice” and romantasy vibes for TikTok
- the pacing. Sometimes it’s so slow and sometimes, like the end, it’s unbelievably rushed. This needed another round of edits and a better editor.
I will read the second book because the cliffhanger was fun. But I’m a little disappointed.
Moderate: Sexual violence
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
I also liked the mystery of this and was surprised at who the killer was!
My one negative critique is that both characters talk about how they don’t want kids or marriage but that shifts really quickly by the end. I understand people’s ideas changing when they meet the right person BUT I do wish that SEP had them stay firm at least with their desire to not have children as it’s so rare in romance.
Moderate: Murder
Minor: Death of parent