Quick note: This is a historical fiction book, definitely not fantasy.
I had never heard the myth of Xishi and so I went into this book completely blind.
The prose is beautiful and the story was overall great, but the pacing and lack of character depth was what threw me off a bit. The book felt like a fairytale, I don't think it was meant to have a lot of details or depth but rather a strong overarching story, but it still felt lacking. It felt like all these things were being set up but then fell apart by the end.
For example, the beginning was built up beautifully. We see Xishi and Zhengdan’s humble beginnings, and this felt like a drama. The pace during the training was fine to me, I actually liked Fanli and XIshi's pining. Their dynamic was set up so well with their devotions to their missions being the most important thing to them. Their few scenes were done so well and I loved their interactions, especially the tea house scene.
However, once we get to the middle in the Wu Kingdom is where the pacing kind of falls apart. Time seems to pass so slowly but we skip years, but Xishi also doesn't really do anything? I also felt like Zhengdan was purely a sidekick and I would've loved to see her actually grow more...The setup for her death was weak as well...It felt like Xishi just needed another reason to hate the Fuchai...
I loved the climax with Xishi and Fuchai. I thought their relationship was soo well done, and really created this gray area between their nations.
Overall, very interesting glimpse into Chinese culture. Wish it would've been fleshed out a bit more!
"The heart is a fickle thing; it takes and takes. It is easily swayed, and tempted, and made weak. Too many have fallen victims to their own irrational desires. But the mind-the mind is dependable, accurate, deadly. It destroys the enemy, not the self, and ensures that we do what we need to, not what we want."
One could live with almost anything, so long as they had something to life for.
"So this is how it feels...to be cut by your own blade."
The story felt incredibly rushed and corny. The dialogue was unbelievable and lacked any kind of personality. None of the dialogue felt like it was coming from the characters, like you could just swapped any speech bubbles with any other person's and it wouldn't have mattered.
The characters all felt like caricatures and 1-dimensionial. We see zero development from any of them except for some forced language at the end, and they really reacted so unrealistic. For example Daniel gets over Lauren's death almost immediately, and we don't actually see any kind of reactions from anyone else...
The plot felt like it had 0 stakes and also 0 emotional weight to anything. The violence felt boring, even when done for shock value. The story didn't flow at all, it just felt like we were rushed from scene to scene without any kind of build-up or foreshadowing.
Then there were some casual racist jokes by characters that added nothing to the plot. One made by the big baddie and then another by Jeremy during what was supposed to be a tense time.
The illustrations were interesting. Incredibly gritty and realistic with a neat style. Really the only good thing about the story, although at times the characters looked creepy and too detailed? If that makes sense.
Anyways, I managed to finish it in one sitting because of how little pages there were, but maybe it could've benefited from an additional volume.
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
(Received an advanced copy from BookSprout and Frankie Diane Mallis!)
I didn’t realize how long this book was until AFTER I finished it. 700+ pages went by quickly, and at no point did I feel like it was dragging.
The pacing felt really good compared to the last book. We get action, romance, world-building, and knowing that this is only book 4 of 7 really helped me with enjoying the ride.
Lyr and Rhyan are such a power couple and it was interesting to see them in some new environments! I wouldn’t say there was a lot of character development honestly; except by maybe one person. Also, Morgana’s POV was especially interesting to me and I can’t wait to see what she’s planning.
Despite the dangers that the main couple was in, I'm soo glad they were able to find alone time!! Loved that for them.
The multiple POVs seemed a bit excessive at first, especially of a certain character that I didn’t really like, but it ended up working out for plot reasons.
I loved all the parallels with the Lore, it felt like things were really coming together in this book, we even got a few surprises, but somehow this ended too quickly, despite the page length.
Book 2 continues right where SLTB left off. I think I enjoyed this book more than Book 1 actually.
Faron and Elara really switched stories here, but their connection to the gods and their reactions were interesting to see.
"Being worshipped was hardly a good thing, and a pedestal was nothing but a clifftop to fall from."
Elara being the older sister and having to deal with these new powers and trying to be so selfless versus how Faron was considered selfish for trying to save her family was so GOOD. I really loved their relationship and how much trust they had for each other. That was super refreshing to see and I'm glad we didn't have a miscommunication trope here. I especially liked them coming together at the end and having to fight together, and loved especially how they had to fight with each other's partner.
The characters were soo well done too. I loved Faron's rage and anger, Elara's patience and trust and even Reeve and Signey. There were so many casual Queer relationships as well, I loved the representation.
We get a little more action and fighting than in Book 1, and I still really liked the alternating POVs from both sisters, although near the action at the end I felt like the lost-time worked against us. I liked how they were both really able to grow and develop individually but really loved Faron's inner turmoil and how she was forced to work with Iya.
This book spent a little more time with politics and seeing how the leaders dealt with the threat of war but that it was truly the people on the ground who had to live with it.
This is a YA book but I liked the little nods at how this could be a metaphor for the current US political climate, it could be too obvious for some.
"Life becomes not about living, but only about surviving. We deserve more than that."
Quote from the last Chapter: "Every day, we're going to wake up and we're going to try."
For example, Faron spends the majority of the book wondering how she can come back form this, how her country will punish her, ect but we don't get any specifics on what happens to her?
Overall a solid story, great characters and development and the magic system was pretty cool. The pacing could've been better; the beginning of the book started off pretty slow with weeks passing by and nothing happening, and yet the ending and epilogue felt very rushed. I just wished it was longer!
Gothic, mysterious, a dash of romance and a magical circus? *Chef's kiss*
The atmosphere of this book was soo good. Victorian era with different POVs that peeled back layers of a mysterious challenge that left questions unanswered until the very end...
The pace was very slow and the beginning was a bit hard to get into because of how little info we're given. Hector and Mr H. pissed me off so much with their roundabout way of answering questions, but I guess that's just their characters.
The magic system wasn't explained at all, and the characters were a bit cliche, but the descriptions of the circus was amazing. Each new magic tent was filled with such unique demonstrations that I absolutely loved!
We're given so little information by the characters about anything, a lot of them speak in riddles and leave so much out that I just pushed through, but I really enjoyed this book. The ending was worth it, although a bit predictable in terms of the main couple. We don't get a lot of resolution beyond them, but still a very interesting read.
..."Why do we wind our watch?” “Because everything requires energy,” she recites obediently, eyes still focused on her hand. “We must put effort and energy into anything we wish to change.” (p. 20).
“People are naïve about such things...And they would rather write them off as evil than attempt to understand them. An unfortunate truth, but a truth nonetheless.” (p. 35).
“Scent is often underestimated, when it can be the most evocative.” (p. 134).
I really got into the mystery and could feel the tension between Loli and X, I thought the idea of them being "pen pals" was so cool and I was excited to see how they kept managing to one-up each other.
Loli was an interesting, 3-dimensial character. She felt incredibly fleshed out. She's confident, but chaotic, but also selfish and stubborn, and I think it's refreshing to see a young Black woman be unapologetic. She did what she wanted and that made the story so stress-inducing because you're able to see down what road she's going...
The mystery behind X was really interesting, I found myself paying attention to all the side characters to really try to suss him out. The side characters weren't totally background players, they had their own roles and stories too which was nice but I think it would've been cool to see more from them.
One thing that was a bit disappointing was that we don't get any real closure on her character arc at the end...There were no real consequences for Loli, even at the end. The adults in this whole town, including the cops, let her do whatever she want and that took me out of the story a bit.
The story was still good, definitely would recommend!
(I added a minor content warning for gun violence, but no one actually gets hurt, just threatened)
(I received a copy of this book for free from the publisher Little, Brown Book Group (UK) via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review)
This was such a fun book!
The characters were interesting, the magic system was unique, but I felt like there wasn't a lot of action.
There was some great rep (racially and sexuality-wise) with Elara being into girls and casual Queer relationships (the queen having two moms for example). I also think Faron's relationship with Reeve was fun to watch develop, especially as their both dedicated to Elara.
It went by very fast, and for the first part I genuinely thought I had started on book 2 or something because what do you mean we missed a whole war!? So listening to the main characters talk about these wars and battles that had already happened was a bit confusing for a second, I wish we could've experienced that with the characters instead of as exposition or flashbacks.
I think I would've liked to see more exposition on the worldbuilding though, some things weren't clear enough for me but maybe it'll clear up in the next book.
The characters were great. Having the alternating POV from Faron and Elara made the story interesting and I really liked both sisters. I liked how (spoiler for the last chapters): they basically switched at the end too. Faron really went through some development, and I'm curious to see where her story goes. I did have to remind myself that they're still pretty young kids though, so give them some grace...
We didn't really see a lot of fighting or action until the very end, which was disappointing. Faron really only used her powers for "kid-stuff" rather than anything substantial, especially when it would've saved the life of someone close to her.
The majority of the book felt dedicated to Characters > Plot, and it did have some romance side-plots for each sister, which is a plus if you're a fan of that.
The twist ending was a bit predictable, but it's a YA book so I didn't expect anything super complicated. Over all really great, can't wait for book 2!