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Carnal Sanctuary Book One: Savannah's Awakening (Second Edition): A Dark Paranormal Romance by Ellie Sandoval, Ellie Sandoval

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Did not finish book. Stopped at 77%.
This reads like a 14 year olds bad fanfic. Editing is not an option, it is a necessity. I really really tried to finish it so I could leave a full review but I simply couldn’t. It went from laughable bad to just bad. The smut scenes make zero sense and are poorly written. Get a couple of ARC readers that won’t lie to you. Take this back to the drawing board.