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Weird vibes, Fitzy, but at least you didn't steal this story from your dead wife? I say progress!
I have so many strong feelings- none of them are good.
The editing- or lack there of made me want to punch a wall. The run on sentences, lack of appropriate punctuation, and simply filler was too much. If I see anything in parentheses again I will gouge out my eyes.
Dear god in heaven, and the character development? I ask you- WHERE WAS IT. It felt like I was reading a 14 year olds badly written diary. Oh, and the romanticizing of cheating, gas lighting, and possessiveness? Hailll no.
The editing- or lack there of made me want to punch a wall. The run on sentences, lack of appropriate punctuation, and simply filler was too much. If I see anything in parentheses again I will gouge out my eyes.
Dear god in heaven, and the character development? I ask you- WHERE WAS IT. It felt like I was reading a 14 year olds badly written diary. Oh, and the romanticizing of cheating, gas lighting, and possessiveness? Hailll no.
