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unabashed_whoopherup's Reviews (42)

adventurous dark emotional sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes

 I would have given it maybe a 3 or so, but unfortunately it was riddled with typos and grammatical errors, enough so that I’d imagine it never saw a proofreader or editor at all.

Errors include things such as:

・Misspelled character names (Alek written as Alex, this mistake separated by only one line)
・Sometimes missing end-quote marks, sometimes mistakenly written with single-quote marks to close speech when opened with double-quote marks.
・What look like autocorrect mistakes (“defiantly” instead of “definitely”, etc.)
・Punctuation errors (eg. question mark at the end of a sentence that clearly should have been a period—something as simple as “he said”), dropped punctuation, etc.

I know that this isn’t just a problem with this particular book either, as I’ve tried reading other books from this writer and run into the same issue 
adventurous tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: N/A

The Haunted Forest Tour

James A. Moore, Jeff Strand

DID NOT FINISH: 75%