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31 reviews
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
The worldbuilding is one of this book’s strongest points. It was laid out clearly in the beginning and built upon as I kept reading. Everything was easy to understand, and felt logical for the story. I also enjoyed the characters. I haven’t read a lot of lovers-rivals-lovers, but it’s definitely a dynamic I enjoyed. The characters, both the main and side, were likable and fleshed out enough to gain an understanding of their actions.
The writing style was also wonderful. I loved the descriptions the author provided. It was intense when needed. The dialogue could be corny at times- but they are teenagers. I didn’t cringe at the modern media references like I often do. It didn’t seem like bad writing, just age-accurate for them.
This is definitely a book I would recommend. It’s authentic and a very interesting read. I’d love another story set in this world. Following Vivian’s group maybe? Either way, I fell in love with the characters and the setting.
Graphic: Gore, Blood, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Body horror, Death, and Violence
Minor: Vomit and Fire/Fire injury
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
The best thing to improve this book would’ve been a map. I’m a very visual person, and it would’ve made it so much easier for me to understand the political conflicts and such. It’s a small addition, but one that would have improved the experience for me.
The author did a great job at characterization. Even when I wasn’t fully invested in the story, I fell in love with the characters and their dynamics. I really enjoyed the dialogue and intersections between characters. They felt realistic and relatable, despite their obviously unrelatable circumstances. I’m also a big fan of how the romance was done. It was important and enjoyable, but not the complete center of the book/plot. Ranka made non-romantic connections that added a lot of depth to her character along with the others. The development of the romance also felt realistic, and didn’t move too quick like in some books.
My biggest gripe with the writing was the repetition. Sometimes it was powerful and meaningful, but other times it bogged down the story. Repetition can be good, and it was at some points, but too often it just felt like lazy writing. I still liked the writing style, and the plot was well done. Hints were sprinkled about, yet I never would’ve guessed the plot twists that happened. I liked the shock factor of them, and it didn’t feel overdone either.
Overall, I wish I liked the book more. I liked the characters and mystery, but I just didn’t connect as much as I had hoped. I would definitely recommend, if it sounds like something you’d like!
Graphic: Body horror, Death, Fire/Fire injury, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Cursing, Emotional abuse, Gore, Blood, and Abandonment
Minor: Child death
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.5
The beginning, and really most of the book, is extremely slow. This isn’t always a bad time, but it felt like nothing happened until the last quarter of the book. Once I hit the point where Yat died (the big plot moment), it got better. The middle made more sense, despite how slow it was. I never felt attached to the characters, I had absolutely no emotional connected. This really stunted it for me, because I couldn’t care less about what happens to them.
The writing is very good at some points, but is mostly confusing. This book could really use a map of the world and a glossary of terms/places. I had no idea what was going on most of the time, and not because of the New Zealand dialect. I simply could not grasp the importance of any places or organizations.
The biggest problem I had with the book was that the plot progressed so sporadically. The last quarter of the book springs so much lore and answers on the reader that it’s difficult to pick up. Also, it felt like it came out of nowhere. This story could have worked well with informations sprinkled throughout, but that didn’t happen.
I pretty much only finished the book so I could read something else. I enjoyed the plot twist at the end and it was extremely surprising, but that doesn’t make the book good. I’m happy for those who enjoyed it, but this wasn’t for me. I won’t be reading the second book, unfortunately.
Graphic: Hate crime, Homophobia, Blood, Religious bigotry, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Drug use, Violence, and Death of parent
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
The writing style was good and the author did a great job at invoking emotions. I quickly became attached to the characters, and I feel they had a lot of personality. Though I will say, the romances did feel slightly forced and moved quickly for the characters (in my opinion.) Despite this, I did enjoy the couples together, so I can overlook the lack in development for them.
Overall, it was a good book. Some plot twists were expected, but I think the more important ones caught me so off-guard. I was pleasantly shocked at the end, and I’m looking forward to reading the second book.
Graphic: Death and Sexual content
Moderate: War and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Animal death, Death of parent, and Alcohol
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Graphic: Violence, Blood, Grief, and Fire/Fire injury
Moderate: Death, Kidnapping, War, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Misogyny and Sexual harassment
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Gore, Physical abuse, Violence, and War
Moderate: Sexism, Blood, Grief, Religious bigotry, Pregnancy, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Suicide and Abandonment
3.25
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Violence, and War
Moderate: Child abuse, Child death, Sexual violence, and Sexual harassment
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Graphic: Blood
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
Graphic: Violence and War
Moderate: Torture, Blood, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Animal death and Bullying
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
It had a bit of a slow start, but that’s not necessarily a bad thing. It gave me time to understand the characters and adjust to the writing style. I enjoyed the worldbuilding even if occasionally it seemed out of place. I will say the writing was not the best quality (in my opinion). However, the other aspects such as the plot and cast of characters pulled through for me.
The romance was one of the iffiest parts. I love love love the concept and I do like the love interests together. Though I felt that their relationship could’ve been developed more beyond conversations to move the plot forward. I’d kill for a nice domestic or just..simple banter between them. That could just me by taste in romance.
The end was definitely one of my favorite parts. I liked the build-up and plot twists. While I was suspicious of some things, the actual reveals were so good. I can see now the hints towards the truth, which is a nice feeling as a reader. Overall, the book was kinda mid compared to my expectations but it had its good parts.
Graphic: Bullying, Torture, Violence, and Blood
Moderate: Child abuse, Death, Drug abuse, and Classism
Minor: Suicide