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OK this one was spicier than I expected from the cover. I would say there were definite dom/sub vibes, but Oliver was a terrible dom. A couple of mentions of after care, but the one time they do impact play (also Isaac's first time doing impact play and he not only gets spanked with a hand, but hit with Oliver's belt) Oliver makes Isaac return to a gala event with zero after care at all. Not. Cool.

The story felt super disjointed and characters would do something in one chapter, then feel like they did a 180 in the next chapter.

I am also not a fan of a virgin MC getting married within a year of their first time. Especially an 18yo MC with some serious religious trauma that feels like it's more of a plot point, than something that should be a bigger hurdle to overcome.

That being said, I may read Owen's book, purely because he was the best character we met.

Definitely a cute and cozy read. Unproblematic characters with very little conflict.

The author missed a chance to have conflict with Mr Frank, but I also don't mind reading something that isn't angst filled.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.
This story had spelling mistake, Insta love and first time anal with zero lube.
I loved the whole ridiculous mess.
All you need is butts.