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The Pucking Wrong Number

C.R. Jane

3.35 AVERAGE

medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

The Pucking Wrong Number
Rating: ⭐/5

This is the first book in a five-part series, but unfortunately, it did not work for me and I will not be continuing.

The premise has potential: a “wrong number” leading to an unexpected connection between two strangers. However, the execution left much to be desired. The narrative relies heavily on familiar romance clichés — a wealthy, attractive male lead, a quirky but somewhat passive female lead, and an instant attraction that quickly turns into an intense relationship. Unfortunately, the story rarely moves beyond these tropes.

The pacing is uneven. While the book attempts to blend romance, drama, and intimacy, the frequent explicit scenes often interrupt the flow of the plot rather than enhance it. The emotional depth feels underdeveloped, and many moments that could have carried weight are overshadowed by repetitive exchanges and predictable developments.

Characterization is also a weak point. The male lead’s intensity often crosses into controlling behavior, while the female lead’s responses feel inconsistent and lacking in agency. Their chemistry comes across as more physical than emotional, which makes it difficult to believe in the longevity or authenticity of their connection. Side characters are minimally developed and contribute little to the story’s depth.

In terms of writing style, the prose is straightforward but lacks nuance. Emotional beats are often told rather than shown, and the dialogue tends toward simplicity. The “romance” is more about heightened tension than believable emotional progression, which may appeal to some readers but ultimately left me detached.

While the book delivers on certain surface-level elements of contemporary romance, it does so at the expense of plot cohesion, emotional resonance, and character growth. Readers seeking a slow-burn romance with layered personalities and strong narrative structure may find this lacking.

Final verdict: 1 star — for the initial concept, but the execution did not deliver.

Definitely dark. The relationship was very superficial
dark emotional medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
challenging dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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OBSESSED

I have heard nothing but good things about this book online and I was not disappointed lol

I am mainly a MM reader so this is my first MF book is a really long time. But let me just say, I don’t dislike MF or any variation of it, I just read more MM books
adventurous dark funny medium-paced
dark emotional fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

 
At first, I thought the book was okay – he was possessive and very protective, and I assumed it was going to be a cute romance story. But as it went on and it turned out he was basically a stalker, it completely lost me. He treated her like an object, took over every part of her life, and manipulated her constantly. She had no independence left. In the end, it wasn’t romantic at all – just toxic and disturbing.

I loved the recipe at the end