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talonsontypewriters's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.5
The writing ranges from dry to pointedly (in other words, unnaturally) quotable, and the dialogue is somehow even more stilted and unrealistically grammatically flawless than the narration. A few spoken lines toward the end literally go on uninterrupted and with no stuttering or backtracking for 100+ words; virtually no one, let alone who's suffered recent repeated physical trauma, is that eloquent. Information is revealed in stilted blocks and repeated ten times over. I don't think any teenager -- or person at all -- in the history of cell phones has ever texted like the teenagers in this book are written as doing.
In terms of substance, there's a lot left to be desired as well. All of the individual narrative threads -- or at least most of them -- would make interesting stories, but here they're all kind of crammed into one unbalanced mess. Is the central plot supposed to be Daunis's complex relationship with her family members and community? Her desire to pursue a career in medicine/science and unite traditional and more modern "scientific" practices? Her recovering from and learning about the factors leading up to her best friend's sudden, tragic death? Her role as an undercover informant in an FBI investigation involving meth and her community (as much suspension of disbelief as that requires)? Her and Jamie's relationship? A general critical overview of the treatment of Indigenous women in American and Canadian society? It's never really decided, and so we jump awkwardly from one to the other without more natural transitions or better multitasking, leading to really overall odd pacing.
The general emotional pacing never quite hits either. A significant medical detail about the protagonist is made explicit for the first time 70% in and never serves any real relevance (and is outright contradicted or ignored at other times). Major traumatic events like the murder of Daunis's best friend and
The characters -- including, perhaps especially Daunis -- lack depth, whittled down to one trait (not even one that is shown, but told... multiple times). The supporting cast especially kind of blends together as a result of that weird pacing and unrealistic, stilted dialogue. I couldn't get a real sense of any of their motivations, so the culprit reveal and relationships all feel more than lackluster. In that regard, the romance is particularly egregious, even putting aside the core issues with
Overall, quite disappointing execution of multiple interesting premises, and I remain bewildered by the overwhelmingly positive response. Perhaps it was a great book for many others, but nothing about it ended up clicking or sitting well with me.
(Also, urine, even your own, is not actually sterile! Please do not use it as a substitute for hydrogen peroxide. I know this is set in 2004 -- as little as there is to solidly ground it there -- and a lot of people believe that myth even today, but it just feels... irresponsible to include in a book like this, especially framed as an objective valuable fact.)
Graphic: Death, Drug abuse, Gun violence, Sexism, Violence, Addiction, Drug use, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, Misogyny, Murder, and Racism
Moderate: Death of parent, Racial slurs, Toxic relationship, Suicide, Pedophilia, Rape, Sexual assault, Blood, Dementia, Domestic abuse, Grief, Medical content, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Infidelity, Fatphobia, Alcohol, Sexual content, Alcoholism, Cultural appropriation, Forced institutionalization, Homophobia, Car accident, and Child abuse
charliebriggs96's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
Moderate: Racism, Sexism, Sexual harassment, Addiction, Alcohol, Car accident, Racial slurs, Rape, Medical trauma, Sexual assault, Drug use, Murder, Cultural appropriation, Grief, Death, Death of parent, Dementia, Drug abuse, Kidnapping, and Misogyny
findleydunn's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
Moderate: Murder, Kidnapping, Infidelity, Mental illness, Injury/Injury detail, Gun violence, Grief, Drug use, Drug abuse, Dementia, Death, Cultural appropriation, Sexual violence, Classism, Confinement, Car accident, Blood, Vomit, Violence, Racism, Toxic relationship, Sexual harassment, Rape, Sexism, Death of parent, Colonisation, and Addiction
nefariousbee's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
the biggest asset of this book for me was the huge part that played the MC's indigenous American heritage. absolutely loved that and I wish there were more stories with such deep and loving portrayal of an indigenous culture.
Graphic: Toxic relationship, Gun violence, Rape, Car accident, Confinement, Kidnapping, Racial slurs, Sexism, Drug abuse, Injury/Injury detail, Murder, Death, and Death of parent
Moderate: Dementia, Grief, Infidelity, Addiction, and Gaslighting
emsim's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Kidnapping and Death
Moderate: Death of parent, Injury/Injury detail, Toxic relationship, Sexual assault, Gun violence, Addiction, Drug use, Gaslighting, Infidelity, Car accident, Drug abuse, Emotional abuse, Sexual harassment, Alcohol, Cultural appropriation, Cursing, Dementia, Grief, Murder, Racial slurs, Rape, and Confinement
tigger89's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
The pacing in this book is weird, I'm gonna warn you. Again, I think that it worked, but if you're going into this expecting a fast-paced FBI thriller, you're not going to be happy. To give you an idea what I mean, it's about 85 pages(out of 494) before the incident that propels the plot forward even goes down. Now that's not to say that the early pages are wasted. To the contrary, they build the world and establish the relationships that truly make us care about Daunis and her community. They're very necessary to carry the rest of the book. But they're slow, and you're going to spend about 75% of your reading time on the first 25% of the book. The pace picks up as the story goes on though, with a final action sequence that I loved and a 40-ish page denouement, which I also loved, but I'm weird like that.
Something that I'm very conflicted about is how the early 2000s were represented. The time period feels very accurate to me in terms of character values and how they approach things. This, however, leads directly to my biggest beef with this book: the central romance is questionable at best and predatory at worst. An 18-22 age gap is already on the edge of being a bad idea. Throw in the power dynamics, and those red flags are waving so hard they're about to fly off the pole. However, this is looking at it from a 2021(the publication year) perspective. In the 00s, when the novel is set, this would have been seen as thrilling and romantic(source: I was there). I wasn't surprised at all to read in the author's note that Boulley started work on this idea back in the 00s. And yes, the relationship did have to be romantic in nature; a platonic relationship wouldn't have hit the same notes that were necessary to drive the plot and themes, and I say this as someone who's notorious for deeming romantic subplots unnecessary. I guess I'll chalk this one up as points for historical accuracy, and be thankful that the kids seem to be doing better these days.
Continuing in the theme of "things from the 00s I'd rather see left behind," I want to note that the only gay in this book had been buried even before the first page. Again, there's period accuracy in this, because it was a rough time to be out in high school so many students simply didn't, especially if there wasn't already an established gay-straight alliance. But this novel was published in 2021, and today's readers expect better. I can understand not wanting to dive into the issues, but don't bury the only gay and call it good, because it's not!
The last thing I was conflicted about was the representation of Ojibwe culture and values. Boulley shares a lot, which is a good thing, but at times it felt repetitive. Rather than merely showing something she would explain it, and rather than explaining it just the once she'd often explain it several times, as if to make sure the reader had understood. To end on a high note, one of my favorite things about this book was the elders, especially how the relationships seeded over the course of the story came back into play at the end. That was a good example of showing Daunis's devotion to the elders in her community with a minimum of telling us that it's important to her culture, and I wish the other aspects of Ojibwe culture had been explored in the same manner.
Graphic: Gun violence, Death, and Dementia
Moderate: Addiction, Drug use, Rape, Car accident, Drug abuse, Cultural appropriation, Death of parent, Kidnapping, Sexual violence, Colonisation, Grief, Sexual assault, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Alcoholism and Infidelity
therainbowshelf's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Graphic: Drug use, Medical content, Racism, Colonisation, Cultural appropriation, Death, Drug abuse, Addiction, Injury/Injury detail, Car accident, Blood, Classism, Dementia, Grief, Gun violence, Sexual violence, Kidnapping, Medical trauma, Murder, Rape, Sexual assault, and Violence
Moderate: Domestic abuse, Alcohol, Child abuse, and Abandonment
Minor: Homophobia
Murdered and missing girls and womenmaddiebusick's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Murder, Car accident, Drug use, Grief, Medical content, Medical trauma, Kidnapping, Death, Drug abuse, Injury/Injury detail, Rape, Sexual violence, Sexual assault, Gun violence, Violence, and Suicide
Moderate: Mental illness, Misogyny, Alcohol, Addiction, Vomit, Cursing, Excrement, Blood, Confinement, Dementia, Racism, Sexism, Drug use, Infidelity, Physical abuse, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Colonisation
readingpicnic's review against another edition
5.0
Graphic: Misogyny, Kidnapping, Injury/Injury detail, Gun violence, Grief, Car accident, Death, Rape, Violence, Sexual violence, Sexual harassment, Sexual assault, Pedophilia, Murder, Medical content, Drug abuse, and Addiction
Moderate: Emotional abuse, Racial slurs, Racism, Gaslighting, Homophobia, and Dementia
raemow's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Abandonment, Death, Drug abuse, Drug use, Suicide, Terminal illness, Dementia, Addiction, Alcohol, Car accident, Gun violence, Murder, Rape, Sexual assault, and Violence