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3.3 AVERAGE


Lord Foul's Bane (The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant the Unbeliever, #1)
by Stephen R. Donaldson

Buddy reading the series with a friend. Review to come.
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DID NOT FINISH: 31%

It was really, really terrible. Completely unlikeable and inconsistent protagonist; boring and flat fantasy world.

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I just don't like this... it reminds me too much of the beginning of the Amber series I suppose. It is somewhat slow, I just didn't care for it... Tony, you were more right than I will admit...

was not a fan, ended up not finishing! i love fantasy but for some reason, this one didn't pull me in very much... :(

This book is lots of ok, occasional good, and sporadic "worst thing ever". Also, there's a review out there by a guy named Stephen that Mark a Lawrence commented on as better than the book that was everything about why I think it's meh

I didn't even mind *THE rape scene* that much. I just found the narrative to be boring and slow, the language unlikable and pretentious. I also hate books that turn out to be someone's dream. Well, except when it makes sense and/or is shocking (Ubik, for example). In conclusion: booooooring!

Thomas Covenant, recently diagnosed with Hansen's disease (leprosy), finds himself catapulted into a strange realm called The Land, ruled over by Lords, and under threat by the immortal Despiser, Lord Foul. Because of his resemblance to a mythic hero, and because he wears a wedding-band of white gold, the Lords believe that he has come to be the saviour of The Land. Covenant, however, wants nothing to do with their plans, yet he ends up as part of the Quest to retrieve the Staff of Law from the Cavewight Drool Rockworm.

I wanted to like this book. I wanted to enjoy this book. Unfortunately, I found it ultimately derivative--it read like a second-rate Lord of the Rings, right down to the Horse Lords (called Ramen in this case)--and overwrought. The prose was definitely mauve most of the time, if not downright purple. Donaldson's use of the English language is tortuous at best, and I was often left thinking, "You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means."

Perhaps I missed the point. Perhaps this was meant to parody The Lord of the Rings and other "high fantasy" novels. But if it was, and I missed the point, then perhaps it wasn't very good at its aim. I doubt I'll read another in the series.
adventurous dark sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

TW: Sexual assault

I get what this novel is going for completely— I think that to call Thomas Covenant an anti-hero isn’t quite accurate. Characters like Moorcock’s Elric or Leiber’s Fafhrd and the Gray Mouser are anti-heroes— that despite their allegiances or physical constraint, they’re still capable of being powerful figures in the heroic tradition or may employ dubious means to carry out otherwise heroic acts. Covenant is a complete inversion of the fantasy hero by being not only physically impotent and damaged, but mentally fractured and embittered as well. A character defined by his constant pain and anguish as a leper, which shapes his morality and his relationships. When pain is of such normalcy to him, he reciprocates by inadvertently inflicting pain on others. I think this creates a very fascinating kind of protagonist, having the main character in a genre known for its larger-than-life heroes, as a misanthropic, weak-willed cynic. Unfortunately, that’s where my interest in Lord Foul’s Bane kind of stops, and I think these ideas/themes could have been conveyed with a different impetus than that of the rape of an underage girl.

I’ve read other reviews on here, decrying Covenant as an intensely unlikeable character, and how that makes the novel bad. That’s not what I have a problem with-- unlikeable heroes are something of a draw for me. However, by making this vile deed his first major act as a character, Donaldson must’ve known that any of his redeeming qualities were going to be very hard to convince the reader of, and I really don’t quite think the story succeeds as a redemptive one, and I don’t think it ever could (whether this was intentional on Donaldson’s part, I don’t know). Covenant acknowledges that he is beyond forgiveness, but it still begs the question of why the event occurs in the first place. Lena’s rape is even framed as a “sacrifice that had to be made for the greater good” which left a really sour taste in my mouth right from the get-go. It’s not that the material in this novel is too dark, too grim or too unsavory, it’s that (from what I understand of later novels) I feel the rape scene seems to be a device to later punish Covenant as an exchange of karmic blows, when the novel could’ve easily used a different and less… wretched way of introducing the reader to not only the themes surrounding the main character, but the world in which the characters inhabit (seeing as though it’s the first thing of consequence that happens in “The Land”). It fosters this dilemma where it could easily become a series known for how much the characters suffer more than anything else, and I ultimately don’t see much of a point in reading that.

As for the fantasy elements— as I’ve said in past reviews (notably in my review for Steven Erikson’s Gardens of the Moon), I’m not a huge reader of very world-building-centric SFF, as the world has to be exceptionally interesting (Dune, Hyperion, Left Hand of Darkness for example) for me to invest time and effort into fully retaining those details. Lord Foul’s Bane is yet another fantasy that carries the tradition of detailed worldbuilding, and while I can commend the effort it takes to form a fully-realized fantasy world, it doesn’t make for the most engaging stuff when a good chunk of the dialogue is spoken in lore-dumps and when a lot of it is the homogenous details found in most high-fantasy, Tolkien-derived novels of this type.

In the end, despite all my objections, I won’t say it’s a bad novel necessarily, but definitely an unenjoyable one— Donaldson’s writing quality is generally high, I can appreciate what he was trying to do with a character like Covenant as a reaction to heroic fantasy, and the lingering idea that “the Land” could be a coma-induced dream-like state… I can also chalk up some creative choices as a fantasy novel as not being my thing rather than being objective flaws (I like my fantasy to be either much weirder/more solitary or more subtle with fantastical concepts). However, I definitely feel that it’s a product of its time. I’m not very likely to read the sequels, as while it’s not my least favorite thing I’ve read this year (that still belongs to GotM), I don’t think it quite reached that threshold of enjoyability for me to invest the time into reading further.

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This is a good book, but it borrows a lot from fantasy 101, and we all know that Fantasy 101 borrows heavily from Tolkien. This story has many of the recognizable Tolkien elements, twisted around, and wrapped up differently.The book is about a leper from the mid-1900's who travels to fantasy world bringing with him white gold which is magical in this new world. A very different "hero" is the center of this fantasy novel. It plays out the reluctant hero bit to the extreme, in fact making him do some repulsive things. A lot of his motivation centers around his leprosy, which seems to be healed in this new world. It digs deep, and it's main character asks questions of himself we are not use to fantasy characters asking.

The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant are the first fantasy series I ever read and started my life