3.64 AVERAGE


Absolutely fantastic.

This is such a beautifully woven novel. It invited outrage, joy and fear at every twist and turn; a particular terrifying highlight was
Spoiler when the old Queen was discovered with deadened eyes and her ladies in waiting with melted tongues.
I read in shock. It had the feel of somewhere between Great Expectations' Miss Havisham and The Walking Dead. Though I read horror as a matter of course, it was truly shocking.

The world within a hive has long been interesting to me; any animal that shows that level of social intelligence naturally draws our interest. However, Paull managed to make real the world of bees in a way that many talented writers would struggle to do.
Fully immersive and an instant favourite.

Accept, obey and serve.


This was io9 Book club read for September.

I wasn't particularly blown away by idea, since:

1)Anthropomorphized animals are nothing new. Animal Farm comes in mind,but my first thought Watership Down. It's a perspective from rabbit's pov, about rabbits' way of life and rabbits' priorities. Kind of like Flora and bees.
2) I firmly believe this would be a great in shorter format. Being inside hive is fun for some time...but it gets repetitive and boring after certain time.
3)I really dislike "The Handmaid's Tale meets The Hunger Games" selling point since really... it isn't. This novel completely lacked conflict and twist.
I liked Flora, she was a metaphor for different, from how she looked (darker) but specifically in way she behaved.

Just an ok read for me.
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DID NOT FINISH: 44%

A friend recommended this book-- the way she described and talked about it was really intriguing but I'm just not finding it all that interesting. 
adventurous tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
challenging dark emotional hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes

Chapters from different times and characters' points of view
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: N/A

Incredibly unique. A rare original!

Something is amiss with this book and I am trying to figure out what it is! Can you help?

It has an ingenious premise - the story of a single bee in a hive - which is the reason I picked it up. It is wildly creative in the ways it incorporates, explains, and expands on actual bee behavior. The heroine is smart, plucky, and resourceful. There are shades of 1984 in some of the ways the hive operates.

I liked the beginning, some of the middle, and the end. So, then, why only 3 stars? Because there's something that doesn't quite work.

Even though some of the chapters end in a DA VINCI CODE kind of way -- where you're left hanging on a cliff of suspense, I did not find myself eager to resume reading. My interest kept flagging because I just wasn't able to remain engrossed.

I'm wondering if perhaps the premise simply doesn't hold up for 300+ pages. Maybe this is a really good 200 page book that just needed a good editor. Anyway, if you agree with me, I'd love to hear your theory of what's off, by leaving me a comment. Thanks.

Interesting premise, but very derivative in its execution. Flora is just another sanitation bee, and there will be no exceptions made! But somehow everyone treats her like she’s different. She gets to be all these other kinds of bees. She is the unique special snowflake, just this time in bee form.
Another issue with this premise is the lack of emotion. While I chose this book because of the inhuman narrator, I found that a lot of the language falls flat. I felt no emotion, other that irritaiton, while reading this book.
SpoilerThere was one point, early in the book, where Flora was expected to eat a baby, and I was horrified by this. Sadly, that’s the only point where I felt any emotion that was expected of me.
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This book could have been a compelling and fast-paced short story. In novel format, it drags, and I was bored for the majority of it. The only reason I finished it was because I’m nearing the end of the 2017 PopSugar book challenge, and I had to find a book from a nonhuman narrator.
adventurous

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Flora 717 wird in die unterste Klasse eines totalitär regierten Bienenstocks geboren. Alle dienen der Bienenkönigin und verhalten sich ihrem Stand entsprechend. Doch Flora fällt schon zu ihrer Geburt durch ihre überdurchschnittliche Größe und ihr Sprachvermögen auf und schafft es so, ihre Klasse zu verlassen und in die tiefsten Winkel des Stocks vorzudringen.

Während der Roman zu Beginn noch an The Handmaid’s Tale erinnert, mit seinen strengen Hierarchien und den religiösen Grüßen (“Accept, Obey and Serve”), verliert er sich nach den ersten 50 Seiten leider in seiner Episodenhaftigkeit. Kapitel für Kapitel wird ein Teil des herkömmlichen Bienenlebens abgearbeitet und fiktiv dargestellt. Mit Protagonistin Flora besteht zwar der Versuch, einen schwarz-gelb-gestreiften Handlungsfaden in die Geschichte einfädeln, aber das Unterfangen scheitert daran, dass Flora sich als absoluter Mary Sue Charakter entpuppt. Während sie ihr Leben noch in der untersten Kaste als Säuberungsbiene beginnt, wird schnell klar, dass verborgene Talente in ihr schlummern, die sie nach und nach beinahe jede Rolle im Bienenstock übernehmen lassen. Praktisch für die Handlung, unglaubwürdig für eine einzige Figur. Flora kann alles und überlebt jede gefährliche Situation ohne Probleme. Dazu kommt die fehlende Introspektive, die der künstlerischen Darstellung einer Bienensicht geschuldet sein mag, aber eben nur oberflächliche Einblicke zulässt. Als Novelle hätte das noch funktioniert, aber als 300+ Seiten starker Roman wird es schnell langweilig.

Stilistisch ist The Bees eine seltsame Mischung aus bienenspezifischem Vokabular (Waben, Fühler, Flügel, Propolis) und Vermenschlichung (die Bienen “haben Hände”, im Bienenstock gibt es Sofas und Gesänge). Das macht die Erzählung einerseits interessant und nachvollziehbar, andererseits muss im Kopf konstant die Vorstellung angepasst und hinterfragt werden, ob es das bei Bienen wirklich gibt oder ob das künstlerische Freiheit ist. Das kann natürlich den positiven Nebeneffekt haben, dass Lesende selbst recherchieren und mehr über diese erstaunlichen Insekten lernen. Trotzdem wäre in diesem Zusammenhang ein klärendes Nachwort hilfreich gewesen, denn einige der Vorkommnisse im Bienenstock klingen nach reiner Imagination, entsprechen aber, wie mir das Lesen eines Wikipedia-Artikels gezeigt hat, der Realität.

Für mich hat The Bees nur in der Hinsicht funktioniert, dass es mich dazu bewegt hat, endlich [b:A Sting in the Tale: My Adventures with Bumblebees|18465526|A Sting in the Tale My Adventures with Bumblebees|Dave Goulson|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1408325124l/18465526._SY75_.jpg|24577475] von meinem TBR zu ziehen, einem Sachbuch über Hummeln, das ohne verwirrende Vermenschlichungen und eintönige Figurenzeichnung auskommt. Wer aus der Sicht von Tieren lesen möchte, könnte stattdessen zum Klassiker [b:Animal Farm|170448|Animal Farm|George Orwell|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1325861570l/170448._SY75_.jpg|2207778] (ebenfalls totalitäre Regierungsform) oder [b:Watership Down|76620|Watership Down (Watership Down, #1)|Richard Adams|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1405136931l/76620._SY75_.jpg|1357456] greifen.