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Spiral

Bal Khabra

3.81 AVERAGE

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DID NOT FINISH: 48%

I feel like I've read 200 pages of omg there's a photo of us in the press, what should we do over and over again 
adventurous emotional funny lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
medium-paced
funny lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional funny hopeful inspiring lighthearted sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
funny hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional funny hopeful lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
lighthearted relaxing fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes


I love the fake dating trope and I really enjoyed Collide, so I was really looking forward to this one. Unfortunately, I just didn’t feel as hooked with this one. I did like the premise and the characters, but I felt there wasn’t enough emphasis on the fake dating aspect. Like they took a couple of pictures and shared them every now and again, but they didn’t really go on many fake dates and pretty much all the affection was done behind closed doors anyway, so clearly real and not fake. It kind of annoyed me how after all this that was clearly real, that they then went down the “we knew this had an expiration date” route, when it was clearly unnecessary. The whole moving in and sharing a bed thing too - it just seemed pretty unrealistic for two people who’d only just met and only just started fake dating. I also felt a couple of the injuries and potential drama was just added for the sake of it and not really needed. I did like that they both managed to find their place in the world, make each other happy and the found family aspect etc. It was a nice read, but I think I got to the point where I was ready for it to be finished. If you like sports romances though you may still enjoy this 😊

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