3.53 AVERAGE

mellymel911's review

3.75
emotional fast-paced

Ahhh!!

This book was so good! Couldn’t put it down! Was excited to read this one. The cliffhanger tho

I...what!??

In desperate need of an editor

The plot of this is great but I barely got to enjoy it because the writing is so dire. An editor was desperately needed to help the flow of the prose. Unfortunately without one it’s clunky and difficult to follow.

DNF @ 18%. Between awful editing and a boring storyline, I couldn't read anymore.

Where do I start? From the shitty writing? Or the plot that makes no sense? Or the weird, full of swear, useless scenes and repeated dialogs?
This has a lot - and I mean A LOT - of potential that weren't met. I hated it. FULL STOP.

Can't tell if I want to read the next book or not

Review to come

What the holy hell???

OOOOMMMMGGGGEEEEEE! What a freaking ride! Sloane and Dorian were the most epic enemies to lovers in a very twisted but tortured souls type of way. Who is this long lost friend of their dad? What's his angle? Well friends, when reality smacks you in the face, it's a backhanded, all knuckles, pimp slap!

dkhurley's review

5.0
adventurous challenging dark mysterious tense
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes