4.02 AVERAGE


I made it 11% thru. I found it boring.
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Plot or Character Driven: A mix
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This is a nice LitRPG power-fantasy. The protagonist is likable, if lacking much altruism. This one is set on a modified Earth, brought into the "System," which is a sub-genre I quite like.

My only gripe is the author's tendency to repeat a word. Adverbs and qualifiers come in pairs within a sentence or two, as if the word was stuck in his head struggling to drop onto the page one more time. Weird, and hard to miss once you notice the pattern.
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Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

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adventurous medium-paced
adventurous dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
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This man can't write dialogue, but he can come up with an interesting story.

Really weird and repetitive word choices and awkward sentence structures were a bit of a distraction. The main character is also kind of a jerk-ass monster.

It was a fun read though!
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DID NOT FINISH: 14%

Over powered MC who by some loopholes didn’t get a tutorial but was able to gain a ton of titles and stats points and the opportunity to gain a lot more power before the average person even gets out of the tutorial zone… idk I’m not feeling it.