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A Touch of Darkness by Scarlett St. Clair

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booksthatburn's review against another edition

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Stopping because Persephone is happy that Hades is paternalistic and sexist, punishing someone because they scared her and she’s a woman. There’s also some ableist language in a way that’s not important to the narrative, and Persephone keeps thinking of some non-human people as “creatures” and “monsters” in a way that feels disparaging. I don’t like this version of Persephone and I don’t like how the story is being told.

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book_s1ut's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional hopeful informative inspiring mysterious reflective sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0


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diana_raquel's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.75

“Respect could build an empire. Trust could make it unbreakable. Love could make it last forever.”

For a long time, I wanted to read more retellings or inspired Greek mythology books, especially from the myth of Hades and Persephone (one of my favorite myths). So, when this book started to make the rounds on social media, I was interested. However, hyped books are very 50/50 with me. 

When I started to read this book, for a time, I was considering DNF because, in the beginning, there are some parts a bit boring to me. However, when the story starts to gain some speed, the story became really interesting and entertaining. So, this is a 3.75 read for me. It was good, but not enough for a 4 stars book to me. Even so, I plan to read the next book. 

I would recommend this to people who want to read a romance and a modern retelling of the myth of Hades and Persephone. It has well-developed characters, however, in the beginning, the slower pace can be a problem. 

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pages_with_panda's review

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adventurous dark slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.0

✅ Finished Dec 20, ‘22 

Not sure how a book about gods ended up boring, but it was. The first half was slow and uneventful. I managed to finish it so I had to rate it 2 stars nonetheless. 

This had so many awful stereotypes about Persephone that reminded me of Lore Olympus. 

1. Persephone is a young, sheltered, naive, maiden with no powers. Oh, and a virgin (to the delight of Hades). 
2. Demeter is the over-bearing, abusive, controlling mother who stalks her daughter. 
3. Hades is the rich and elusive club owner who is misunderstood. He can do no wrong and is actually a nice guy and tries to help mortals. He also doesn’t want anyone to know. 

The story is told in a modern way, Persephone gets an internship at a newspaper office and decides to write about Hades, despite his wishes to the contrary and everyone’s warnings against it. She ends up losing a bet with him and ends up contracted with him for six months and must “make life” in the Underworld or else be stuck down there forever. 

She basically does whatever she wants this entire book and suffers no consequences whatsoever.
At the end she finally stands up to her mother and finds her power, thanks to Hades, and decides to live with him anyways. 

No real substance to the characters and the story was flimsy at best. 

Wouldn’t recommend as a retelling to the Hades+Persephone. 


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karambit's review against another edition

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hopeful mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.25


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masonposte's review

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I need to stop reading romance books. There were so many basic questions the book left me with. Why was she so angry and possessive? I understand why she might be, but we don’t know Persephone yet! What’s her inner dialogue when she’s experiencing anger? All we get is “I’m rebelling and in danger and angry and turned on”. That’s not interesting. She seems to fly off the handle which I get, her mom is an abusive control freak. But we have no way to understand that if you’re not traumatized in your own life and use anger to cope. If that isn’t the reason, then the characterization is all over the place. 
The narrator also made all the men sound like they were trying to seduce Persephone but sometimes it’s just her boss trying to break the ice and it then comes off creepy. 
Finally, Hades is sexist “don’t hit women but you can hit men” type dude which is just so unappealing. 

I just don’t think romance is for me. I’ll keep my slow burn fantasy novels thank you very much. 

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the_savannahhumphrey's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional hopeful inspiring mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25


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keatonslowlyreads's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

I enjoyed this book much more than I thought I would! I bought it on a whim because I love anything Hades x Persephone (so maybe I’m a little biased) having no clue what to expect. I wasn’t sold at first, as the writing is a bit fanfiction-y, and I found the pacing odd at times, but overall I think it’s a good read. I adore how Hades was written, and I fell in love with him fast. I’m excited to read the rest of the series! 

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slimy's review against another edition

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dark slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
Look this is really really bad. Think of every underdeveloped toxic relationship trope carried out by the cringiest characters you can think of. The main character is supposed to be a college senior but she acts and talks like a 14 year old. Disgusting. 

Also. TERRIBLE editing. So many editing mistakes. Like it’s laughable. I can’t believe this book made it to publication with so many mistakes. It reads like a juvenile fanfic from 2012. 

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cepbreed's review

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dark fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.5

Coming into this book I didn't really know much about it but once I learned it was a myth adaptation I had such high expectations. Madeleine Miller has set every other author who wants to write something based on a myth to unattainable standards. Unfortunately it didn't meet these. However, I still enjoyed this book because it serves its purpose as a fan service novel for women so I can't really complain.

Songs:
  • Wanna Be Yours - Artic Monkeys
  • Flawless - The Neighborhood
  • Chuch - Chase Atlantic

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