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The Last Dragon of the East by Katrina Kwan

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adventurous fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

2.25

If I have to read "my fated one" one more time I may rip out my hair.

The book was mostly fast paced (minus some slog in the middle), especially fast at the end, it could have benefitted from more pages, I really wanted to like this book, in fact, the first 40% was enjoyable, and the book initially sat at 4 stars. The beginning really caught my attention, I loved the idea of Sai being a matchmaker and the opening scene was very well done in my opinion, a great way to open a book, but by the 40% mark the story starts slowly crumbling apart until it becomes a complete mess by the end. Specifically,
it all fell apart when Jyn got injured in the desert (according to the notes past me made at least).
 

I am not sure where to even begin with this book, so I guess I will start with the horrendous prose. I did not notice it in the beginning, the writing seemed fine initially, but the more I read, the more annoying and juvenile it was, the prose is just so crap and I can't put into words why, it is just such poor quality. The dialogue is bad too, it is unnatural for one, but once Sai finds Jyn it gets even worse. I could go on and on about how much I hated Sai's use of petnames, he didn't even pick one pet name, he called Jyn every crappy nickname under the sun and the author always inserted them not only into the most awkward unnatural places, but the sheer quantity of the petnames made me want to put the book down forever. 

The petnames are made even worse by the fact that their love feels so half baked and forced to begin with, the worst thing about reading this book was the fact I would read a passage and see what exactly the author was trying to do, convey, set up, and not in a good way, I would read a crappy paragraph and go "I see she is trying to set up Sai to have xyz personality and bring that back later in the book". I should not be able to pick apart a book like that when I am casually reading in bed. 

This kind of like transparent writing made it really hard to believe they liked eachother, it was so instalove, which I don't even hate, and it technically makes sense here but it was still hard to read, especially because there was a grumpy sunshine trope shoehorned in, made worse by Jyn's very rough and awkward transition from "Go away Sai" to "I love you". All just so...unbelievable?

The characters were half baked too, all of them but especially the supporting cast. Captain Tian and his relationship to Sai made no sense, Feng was annoying and
her death meant nothing
, and that one
weird cannibal guy
was a wild card we did not need. The emperor's characterization sucked too. And Sai, that man was SO stupid and for what? For one, he can see red threads of fate but
won't believe in shamans and dragon scales? He was also so stupid for punching Captain Tian, I had to put the book down.
Jyn was another bad one, her
self harm scene was so random, we have had 0 indication beforehand aside from her brooding a bit and now she is all depressed and cuts herself? So depressed she tried to kill Sai as a kid?
. So random. 

Alot of the story is really unrealistic, the sheer violence and how much the characters got hurt, even with adrenaline there is no way they could have moved let alone kept figting throughout the story, yes fiction will be unrealistic but this story took it way too far to the point of breaking immersion. The violence happening to begin with was odd, this reads like a solid younger end YA then randomly adds crazy gore out of nowhere, imagine watching Ponyo and Miyazaki inserts the level of violence you see in Princess Mononoke into Ponyo, very jarring. Also Sai caring so much
about the blue dragon kid, then never even mentioning all the dead kids he had from his 700 lifetimes is SO weird like, fuck dem kids I guess because he didn't have them with his "fated one"? Him losing control was also just cringey, with the red eyes and bloodthirst and "omg Sai stop this, they're dead" please, is this Twilight?
At this point, I am just complaining about random scenes that made no sense, of which there are ALOT, so it is better to move into worldbuilding. 

It was lackluster. Honestly we know nothing, and when we learn things, it doesn't make sense, such as the
super tall library, when Sai was looking at all those books on that shelf, the books were so diverse in topic, you'd think a library that large would be much more organized.
The environments make no sense, jumping between deserts and mountains and seas, but they travel for 2 days on foot? Everything lacks thought, basically. Even the story of
the dragons interluded within the book, though clearly a stylistic choice, came off as lazy.


Lastly, two large complaints, all to do with the last chapter or 2. One, DON'T FEED A NEWBORN HONEY ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL HER? Two, Sai was lowkey a pedo I can't lie,
his logic for staying away from Jyn as she grew up wasn't "Gee would it not be weird to see my future lover grow from a baby into a woman, would it not be weird to eventually have sex with someone you knew for their whole life when you were the adult", no, HIS logic was " I want Jyn to have a normal childhood without me because she has been through so much", YOU SHOULD NOT WANNA BE IN YOUR WIFE'S CHILDHOOD EVER IF SHE IS A BABY AND YOU ARE A GROWN 25YO MAN!!!


Anyway, book cover is gorgeous and I've read worse.

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adventurous challenging emotional mysterious sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.75

I genuinely really enjoyed this novel. The romance between them was very sweet and although I knew who the two of them were right off the bat (the subtly of their backstories wasn't very subtle) I still had fun reading about it. I have to admit though that I think I confused this story with a different one because I thought this story would be queer. Jyn and Sai were so cute though and it was queer (their son's partner was a man and there were other queer characters) just not between the main characters like I assumed. I kind of hope there's a sequel because I'd love a story about their son being reincarnated but... I don't think I'd like to see R'ong again (his partner). If it's done well though I think I could be into it!

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lokiisreading's review

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Thank you to Saga Press, an imprint of Simon & Schuster, for the free
copy for review.

I was unfortunately  fooled by a pretty cover. 

The beginning was just slow and didn't engage me at all. BUT I wanted to know about this dragon, and why Sai had that frayed thread, so I continued. It started to pick up, but it's still not engaging enough for you. One thing I couldn't stand while reading was figuring out the time period in comparison to how our main characters spoke? (I hope this makes sense) It's like the side characters all spoke with what I expected the people of that time (emperor times lol) to speak, but our MCs spoke very modernly??? MIND YOU this wasn't consistent AT ALL. I just couldn't place this story any where in my head while reading. 

I finally reached my DNF point when Jyn and Sai were running from the three legged red eyed crows, and the scene to me was just boring :/ like this was supposed to be them running from the emperor, and I was so disinterested in if they lived or died. I'm connecting the dots that Jyn and Sai were lovers in a past life and Sai is just regaining his memory of that time, but IT'S DRAGGING!! And it was starting to annoy me that Jen just wouldn't tell him anything (maybe she couldn't... but I'll never know now).

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kaneebli's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional hopeful sad fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0


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ajacobs590's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional hopeful medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

This was a beautiful story with dragons, fated ones, and Chinese Mythology. It was refreshing to read a book on Eastern mythology when most books are based on Western mythology. The author also is a beautiful storyteller and can weave together both the beauty and the struggle in this book. 

This journey was life changing for Sai. He was able to find himself along the way and learned a great deal about his past. He would often use humor to get out of a tough situation. He also loved those around him and would do anything to make sure they were safe. His love for his mother sets him on this journey.

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fictionandfarming's review

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adventurous dark emotional hopeful sad fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes

3.5

3.5 stars rounding up to 4.

The Last Dragon of the East is a fast-paced and dramatic fantasy romance debut from Canadian author Katrina Kwan. Told from the POV of Sai, a young man struggling to keep his family’s teashop afloat while also caring for his ill mother, the story kicks off quickly and sends Sai on an epic adventure inspired by Chinese legends and myths.

Our introduction to Sai and his regular life is quick and well-executed, displaying his ability to see the red threads of fate and the way the people around him react to his gift before taking us back to the teashop where we meet Sai’s mother. While his mother doesn’t get a lot of page time, the moments we do get are very sweet.

The pacing after Sai finds himself in trouble and sent to find the dragon felt disjointed until we reach the point where he meets Jyn. Once the pair are forced together the pacing begins to feel much more natural and everything begins to really come together.

As far as characters go, Jyn was the highlight for me, the poor woman has really been through it, not to mention the way Sai kept needing to be saved. I would have loved to see more of Feng, but she certainly leaves an impression regardless. I can’t help but feel that Sai is such a big dork (meant affectionately), the man has no sense of self-preservation, but he certainly means well and has such an optimistic attitude to everything.

While I enjoyed the way Kwan told the story, the violence was comically over-the-top and detracted from the story. The sheer amount of violence was heavy-handed and stretched my ability to suspend disbelief, and there was a feeling of dissonance between the romantic/myth storyline and the violence.

Overall, a solid debut from a promising author that will definitely appeal to lovers of soulmates and love stories that feel like the stuff of legend.

Thank you to Simon & Schuster Canada/Saga Press for making the DRC available to me. All opinions are my own.

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zluvsreading's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional funny hopeful mysterious reflective sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

How the actual heck do I convey my love for this novel? There’s just no way, but I will try I suppose.

This was such a compelling emotional read. The world building was great and I loved the characters that had so much personality. 

Sai, my silly little man. He was everything and more to me. I admired his strength and how he handled everything that happened in the last few chapters of the book. He was so down bad for his Fated One, it was amazing to read about. Just overall such a funny character who I will cherish forever and want to protect forever. Sai fan page over here!!

Jyn!! Oh my heart bleeds for Jyn. She’s just such a badass and the fact that she had to deal with what she had to deal with for so long is just like wow. She’s stronger than I ever could be in every way imaginable. I love protective badass FMCs and she was the embodiment of that. It was so funny seeing her interact with Sai when they first met. 

Okay, so I just started crying again thinking about the ending like!!!!!! I just think that this is such a great read and everyone should read it. A beautiful fantasy first and foremost but with a love story at the heart of it. The romance was so good, I was giggling and blushing and crying and just like so interested in everything that I was reading.

There’s lots of violence, gore, blood, and just overall death in this but it was written in a way that you can feel it so heavily. I could smell and taste and see and hear everything. All my senses were attuned to this book!!!! Truly no words for how much I love it. Possibly my new favorite romantasy of all time. I love Sai and Jyn and A-Ma. I wish nothing but the best for them.

I love that some characters got what they deserved but oh my god, the swift deaths in this made my heart drop because I was not expecting them at all. My heart hurts. 11/10. I love pain, do it again! 

Thank you to NetGalley and Saga Press for allowing me to read an eARC and Saga Press for providing me with a physical ARC as well. 

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful mysterious reflective sad medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0


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