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riale's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.75
Graphic: Child death and Death
ducktofu's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
1.75
Graphic: Grief, Child death, Death of parent, and Death
Moderate: Suicide attempt, Fire/Fire injury, and Violence
Minor: Car accident
abnormal_shadow's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Death of parent, Death, Child death, and Grief
Moderate: Violence, Panic attacks/disorders, Outing, Murder, Blood, and Fire/Fire injury
Minor: Suicide attempt, Homophobia, Biphobia, Suicidal thoughts, and Terminal illness
alienguy's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Child death, Fire/Fire injury, Suicide attempt, Suicidal thoughts, Death of parent, Death, Terminal illness, and Car accident
Minor: Emotional abuse
bmt1005's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Suicidal thoughts, Grief, Gun violence, Death, Child death, Injury/Injury detail, Fire/Fire injury, and Car accident
kelzone's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Death, Fire/Fire injury, Car accident, Child death, and Violence
escape_to_reality's review against another edition
3.0
Graphic: Death
Moderate: Child death
a_sleepy_berry's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Gun violence, Medical content, Death, Medical trauma, Violence, Death of parent, Fire/Fire injury, Child death, Car accident, Grief, and Physical abuse
Moderate: Animal death, Abandonment, Blood, and Body horror
loafingdragon's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Moderate: Blood, Suicide, Gun violence, Death, Death of parent, and Car accident
Minor: Child death
storykotori's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
1.5
- Just because your audience target is 13-14 years old doesn't mean you need to write as if you are also that age.
- The audience is aware your characters are dying and do not need you to remind them every three sentences.
- Random quotes from famous people that don't specifically relate to your characters doesn't make your book deep.
- There is no need to recap song lyrics from every song. This isn't fanficton.
The premise had potential, but the execution was poor; which was further emphasized by the juvenility of the writing style. Unfortunately, the characters weren't likable enough to pull you through.
Moderate: Child death, Death, and Death of parent
Minor: Terminal illness, Gun violence, Suicide, and Death of parent