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The Morgenstern Project by David S. Khara

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3.0

Third in the Consortium spy thriller series and revolving around Eytan Morgenstern. It's been two years since Jeremy and Jackie met Eytan.

This ARC was provided by NetGalley and Le French Book in exchange for an honest review.

My Take
Khara has been dribbling out teasers for the past two books, and at last we learn a lot more about Eytan. And it fulfills (and more) all the horrors I imagined as we learn of his escape from the lab, and the men who set him on a righteous path. Karol's "chat" with Eytan is perfect as he sets Eytan philosophical questions about the why of war, what drives men to battle. It's also the story in which we learn why Eytan keeps his head shaved.

Nor is Eytan's childhood the only horror, as we discover what the U.S. Army is willing to do to gain recruits. What a joke, semper fi. Jesus.

That said, Khara does jump back and forth in time, so take the time to absorb those epigraphs at the start of each chapter.

It starts off with a cozy, if loud, encounter in Morg's Universe that rapidly descends into an unexpected nightmare. Part of me wishes that Khara had had the bad guys thinking the truth, to let me in on it, but I do realize that the tension wouldn't have been as great. Sigh.

Khara makes a good point about the time and money it takes to train a good solider. How much more cost-efficient it would be if the soldier's body and mind remained at peak condition longer than is normal. As glorious as it could be, Avi notes that mixing man and machine, "deliberately tampering with the course of evolution" is a bad idea.

Even worse is the theory they develop about deliberate plagues so a business could increase the number of buyers for their product. It's scary because I can imagine corporations and governments callous enough to be more concerned about making money than in caring about the people around them. I wouldn't be at all surprised if Khara's mention of fake vials of anthrax being used to push a nation into war. I'm sure the oil companies were able to find a few for them.

I thought Avi had taken care of that coffee machine back in The Shiro Project, 2?
I do love Lafner:
"You've reached the Golda Meir Veterinary Clinic.

"Then there's his response to most of the agents he examines for health and mental issues:
"…and after examining an IDF soldier, you suggested that he be committed to a psychiatric ward."

Followed by:
"The patient presents numerous intellectual deficiencies indicating a serious learning disorder. Re-enrollment in a primary-school program is advised. Plus, he's a prick."
It's at the end that we get to know Attali better, and I'm hoping Khara brings him back in book #4. Sneaky bugger. I adored that scene at the end with Lamont.

I do have two problems with Khara's writing. One is his characters. I do adore them. Well, the good guys, anyway. I love how they think, their beliefs, and their loyalty. They also have a potential for depth, which doesn't get realized.

The second is the unrealistic feel to the writing. More like Khara is writing for young Young Adults or even older middle-graders. Admittedly, I'm basing this on the suspense, thriller, and military fiction stories I've read, but I do wish the men in this didn't sound so namby-pamby. Yeah, they're tough guys. Heck, Eytan could probably leap a skyscraper at a single bound. And while I do admire their protective qualities, they sound more like kids on the playground. It doesn't help that they use each other's first names, that none of them have nicknames, nor that they never use their last names except in introducing each other. They're too nice all the time. That or they shout a lot when they're expressing anger. What can I say, I miss the snarking I've come to expect when alpha men get together.

Eytan's reaction to Jeremy's lame teasing seemed over the top. Nor do I buy Jackie's actions. She reacts like a new, untrained recruit instead of an ex-CIA agent and sheriff's deputy with all the dashing about she does. I'm also having a hard time believing that the experienced Janusz would simply rush in without reconnoitering the area. Then there's Karl-Heinz and what he considers honor. He wouldn't know honor if it hit him over the head. There is no honor in what he does at all.

What is it with megalomaniacs who think they know what's good for everyone else? Cypher claims the Consortium isn't greedy or cruel…could'a fooled me…and they don't seek to dominate the world…really?. Instead Morg states that people don't need plans; they need dreams. And isn't that what we all do? Dream about what we want from life? Dream about a future? Lol, we're not much at planning anything, but yeah, dreaming is definitely a strong point.

It is full of action and drama, tense chases, patient surveillance, and strategic attacks as the group investigates and confronts the men who will lead to the head of the snake. That scene on top of the highrise in Manhattan…whew…

Then the coup de grâce when Dr. Meyer tells the group what he and his students have discovered about those prosthetics. Talk about betrayal. There is another that Eytan and company will employ with good results. For them, anyway.
"Show me a hero and I will write you a tragedy."

The Story
It's a stumble, and one that could end with Eytan locked away in a white room, strapped to a table, and subjected to medical torture.

God knows, they've done it to too many others…

The Characters
Eytan Morgenstern is eighty years old and looks thirty, as a result of Project Übermensch. A Kidon agent for Mossad, he has a preference for motorcycles and a love for painting. Roman is the brother who was murdered by the Germans. Eli Karman is Eytan's case officer and both "father" and "son". He and Frank were the orphans Eytan took on to raise on that boat heading to the new state of Israel in 1953. Rose is Eli's daughter who had her baby in The Shiro Project. Mr. GQ, Dr. Avi Lafner, is Eytan's physician within Mossad. Both men are his friends.

United States - Current time
New Jersey
Jeremy Corbin is married to Jacqueline Walls (we met them — and they met each other! — in The Bleiberg Project, 1. Jeremy owns and runs Morg's Universe, an indie bookstore with rare comics. The highly organized Jackie is a deputy sheriff these days within a small New Jersey town. Annie is their six-month-old daughter.

Michael Dritch is an enthusiastic customer. Greg Nadjar is the brainy, computer engineer with a passion for Tolkien. Mr. Adams is an elderly neighbor with a Welsh corgi.

Manhattan
Monsieur Lionel Datoist loves money and is an excellent chef.

Chicago University
Dr. Frank Meyer is another old friend of Eytan's, the other adopted "son" from the boat in 1953.

Washington D.C.
The OCD Titus Bramble is a legend, highly thought of for his military past. He's the current head of the paramilitary operations branch of the CIA's Special Activities Division. Travis Lamont is a White House envoy, a total jerk, with an expertise in technology, a top advisor to three presidents.

The U.S. military
Lieutenant Delgado leads the mission to take down the Corbins.

A Marine base in Fort Wayne, Indiana
General Paul Bennington is a Marine. Steve is the guard at the gatehouse.

Israel, today
Chief Geopolitical Specialist Simon Attali coordinates intelligence.

London, 1942
Colonel Neville Wladowski is in charge of Special Operations Executive (SOE), an underground combat unit. Second Lieutenant Stefan Starlin is a very adaptable soldier with excellent improvisational qualities as well as arrogant and insubordinate. On death row. Perfect for what Neville has in mind. Sergeant Howard is a guard at the prison.

Poland, 1942–1943
Janusz, a.k.a., the Tawny Bear, was Josef's childhood friend and had been a construction foreman. Now he leads the Armia Krajowahad, a resistance group, and inspires the Polish people. Vassili, a deserter from the Russian army, is the Siberian titan whom no man can stand against. Karol was the scrawny teacher from Krakow who is now their cook and speaks German well enough to pass among them. Marek, a clockmaker before the war, is a pyrotechnist from Lviv while Pawel is their sniper. Piotr is their Polish fighter and close combat expert.

Cecylia and Bohdan Jablonski are farmers who pray that their son, Josef, will return to them. Meanwhile, they help the resistance as much as they can.

Captain Bruno Reinke was one of those rare German officers, one with morals.

Berlin, 1942
Colonel Karl-Heinz Dietz, a.k.a., Der Jäger, the Hunter, believes himself superior to everyone around him, especially the Nazi officials. You want to see him as a good guy, if only because he despises Nazi policies…then you enter his cave of wonders. He will lead a special unit. Maria is a servant who has attracted his eye.

Reichssicherheitshauptamt Reinhard Heydrich is overly egotistical and the protector of Bohemia and Moravia. His boss, Reichsführer Himmler, has just ordered large-scale medical experiments on Jewish children.

Field Marshall Montgomery is pushing Rommel's tanks in North Africa.

Camp Stutthof and Project Übermensch is…
…that large-scale experiment with an unwanted yet successful result. Herr Doktor Viktor Bleiberg is the scientist who created Eytan.

Iraq, 2003
Sergeant Timothy Terry is a Marine sniper who was singled out. Hansen is the joker while Baker and Charlie are the newbies.

Rio de Janeiro, 1953
Juliana is the beautiful wife, and Milene is his daughter. Two people whom Carlos Dies loves and adores. And I love the "torture" perpetrated on him.

The Consortium is…
…an evil organization that wants to oversee humanity's progress and don't care how it's achieved. They did finance Hitler after all. Cypher is the alias used by the group's leader (see The Shiro Project).

Jonathan Cavendish is the president of H-Plus Dynamics. Fergus Hennessy is his assistant, supposedly.

We first met Elena in The Bleiberg Project and got to know her better in The Shiro Project where Eytan helped her set up her death. Ian Jenkins is recovering after events in The Shiro Project *snicker*. He had been the CEO of a successful IT-service company.

Rocco DiSpirito is the New York celebrity chef that has Jeremy enthralled. I like this version of a substitute addiction, lol. A zombie commando unit is composed of men who have "disappeared", "died", who don't exist.

The Cover and Title
The cover is a bright orange with a high-tech target in shades of red to orange with scales in black, a black swastika on a white circular background at the center imposed on what appears to be a topographical map. In the lower right corner are what appear to be fabric wings, like the wings of a butterfly. The author's name is in a dark charcoal at the top with a reminder that he wrote The Bleiberg Project just under his name. The title is in white with a reference in yellow to the series to which it belongs. A blurb from Shelf Awareness provides their opinion.

The title is a direct reference to Eytan with a nod to his past and one to the now, for he's The Morgenstern Project.

okenwillow's review against another edition

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5.0

Voilà c’est fait ! Nous voici avec la suite et la fin des aventures du « Géant vert », sur-homme créé par la folie des hommes. Les deux premiers tomes nous avaient distillé pas mal d’indices et de révélations sur l’origine de Morgenstern, mais le mystère restait bien entretenu et des zones d’ombres étaient encore à découvrir. Nous retrouvons donc notre héros pour une ultime mission et non des moindres, puisqu’il s’agit non seulement de préserver sa propre liberté mais la vie de ses amis Jeremy et Jacky. Lorsque ces deux derniers sont directement menacés, se sentant responsable d’eux et à l’origine de leurs déboires, Morgenstern vole à leur secours. Les personnages m’ont paru encore plus poussés dans ce volume, les relations entre eux sont fortes, une famille se créé autour de Morgenstern. Ce dernier a peu d’attache, il s’efforce de préserver une certaine solitude malgré les événements. Ses origines, sa nature, et le fait qu’il reste un spécimen très convoité l’a poussé à choisir une vie loin de toute contrainte sentimentale. Sa relation avec Eli est très particulière, car si ce dernier est en quelque sorte un fils adoptif, il est plus âgé et pris la place d’un père. Père et fils interchangeables, leur relation reste vraiment troublante et poignante. Leur attachement réciproque ne fait pas de doute, et si Eli a grandi, vieilli, est devenu père et grand-père, Eytan est resté jeune, et seul, prisonnier de sa condition. Ce dernier tome, toujours aussi rythmé par une action omniprésente et parfaitement maîtrisée, met l’accent sur les relations entre les personnages. Si leurs précédentes aventures les avaient rapprochés, leurs liens vont se consolider face à l’ennemi.

Le récit est entrecoupé de sauts dans le passé d’Eytan, juste après son évasion des laboratoires de Bleiberg. Recueilli par des résistants polonais, il n’est encore qu’un enfant malgré ses étonnantes aptitudes. Son évolution accélérée et ses compétences ne passent pas inaperçues et son passage dans la résistance ne sera qu’un préambule à ce qui l’attendra à l’âge adulte. On se prend souvent à espérer un roman complet se déroulant à cette époque. Mais qui sait ?… Le parallèle entre cette nouvelle famille et la groupe de résistants polonais est flagrante, et rajoute un peu plus d’humanité au personnage d’Eytan. La conclusion vaut son pesant de mouchoirs en papier, car l’auteur réussit à émouvoir malgré l’action et la violence omniprésentes. Mais cette trilogie n’est pas que sang et vengeance, c’est aussi l’espoir de la liberté, l’espoir que les erreurs du passé ne se reproduiront pas. Faible espoir certes, mais espoir quand même. L’auteur évoque également certains concepts scientifiques qui ne sont déjà plus des concepts, mais bien des réalités, ou pas loin. Certains peuvent faire froid dans le dos, selon l’usage que l’on en fera. Heureusement, David S.Khara ne manque pas de projets et on peut déjà se consoler en sachant que l’on reverra Eytan Morgenstern, d’une manière ou d’une autre…

tasmanian_bibliophile's review

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4.0

‘War is horrible, but slavery is worse’ (Winston Churchill)

Jeremy Corbin, his wife Jacqueline Walls and their baby daughter Annie were living a quiet life in suburban New Jersey. Then, one day, a series of events shattered the calm and their friend Eytan Morgenstern saved them. Why is the group, known as the Consortium, after Jeremy and Jacqueline? And who is Eytan Morgenstern?

As the story unfolds, we learn more about Eytan Morgenstern and his past. It becomes clear that many people are interested in Eytan Morgenstern: his superhuman strength is one of the legacies of Nazi experimentation. The novel moves between past and present, between London, Tel Aviv, Poland and Manhattan. Eytan Morgenstern may have spent much of his life bringing Nazi war criminals to justice, but the threats to him personally have never been greater. Is it possible for Eytan Morgenstern to break free of the past - can Jeremy and Jacqueline help him?

It’s difficult to review this novel without introducing spoilers, although I’m trying to resist that. It’s also the third novel in a series, and I’ve yet to read the first two books. Suffice to say that there is plenty of action, and sometimes the distinction between the good guys and the bad guys is not easy to make. This is a fast moving thriller which draws on some of the atrocities of World War II as providing some potential for current military aspirations. Individuals are not important in this world, except, perhaps as vehicles for (or recipients of) the science behind strength.

While I intend to read the other books in the series (The Bleiberg Project and The Shiro Project) at some stage, The Morgenstern Project is sufficiently self-contained to be read as a standalone novel.

Note: My thanks to NetGalley and Le French Book for an opportunity to read this novel.

Jennifer Cameron-Smith
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