211 reviews for:

Rookie Mistake

L.A. Witt, Anna Zabo

4.09 AVERAGE

tobiwillow's review

2.0
slow-paced
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anniemartyn's review

3.5

i've decided to make it my mission to read as many hockey romances as i physically can this year im not sorry 

maybe my apartment is a mess bc i don't have a dom who makes me fold my clothes 
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rosereads_books's review

4.5
dark emotional inspiring medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

larag_199x's review

3.5
emotional funny sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

alexinnz's review

4.0
emotional funny lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
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lststars's review

3.75
emotional hopeful inspiring medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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anil's review

3.0
emotional hopeful sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

As a romance novel: fun and enjoyable. Pacing is somewhat unconventional but it works which I thought was fun. Wish there'd been a BIT more development of the relationship before they got together.

As a hockey novel: maybe I just have to face the fact that I am too picky about this aspect. There is actually some number of 'action' scenes in this which I absolutely count in the books favour even if they're not the best written or whatever. I don't like the changes they made to the league though and I don't like the way that long stretches of time you can just forget it's a hockey book. 
Part of this is the way homophobia is like not a thing here I guess. Which - in addition to the way I just kept mentally comparing everything to what irl Kyle Beach went through - made it hard to suspend my disbelief. It all felt weirdly artificial to me and I couldn't fully get into it.

Also did they just play one single game as the scf? I am not skipping back in the audiobook to check I didn't miss anything so I'm not 100% confident but I think they did? Yeah that's about the level of accuracy here.

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julbee's review

5.0
challenging dark emotional hopeful sad medium-paced

lindzmace's review

DID NOT FINISH: 7%

dnf'ed this once because i didn't have it in me to read a book that long in first person at the time.

dnf'ing this time because i was looking at the second book in the series and saw that it has some pretty heavy content warnings (alcoholism and on-page binge-drinking, accompanying trauma). anyone who knows me knows that i have pretty heavy hang ups about alcohol/ not being in control. also literally last week i read a book with a main character who was a (sober) alcoholic. it was almost impossible for me to get through some parts of that so i know i can't do it this time.

unfortunate, because i think i would have loved these books. not blaming the authors! you gotta write what you gotta write. but content warnings are there so you know what to avoid and as such i am avoiding. peace out.

mrathkat's review

3.0
emotional sad fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes