Reviews - Finge que me quieres

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Finge que me quieres

Lucy Score

3.95 AVERAGE

medievalme's review against another edition

3.0

Lol yikes

mollyec03's review against another edition

3.0

just wasn’t super crazy about it but it’s still good, there are just some things that bothered me

colo's review against another edition

4.0

fast-paced

Plot or Character Driven: A mix

Strong character development: Yes

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Very cutesy and kind of demure... Lucy Score you have surprised me.

Didn't love the whole "I can't love you" spiel coming from Luke but you know... it is what it is.

Didn't love the whole insta love we got from Harper. She was saying "I love you" like a month in but you know what.... I don't doubt she did love him but how much of it was her just playing house? You know having a family, not just Luke. Luke's family, friends, in laws. A house. Dogs. etc....

dallasmelnick11's review against another edition

2.0

Well this was my first book of 2023… it was alright kinda slow and I know trauma and all but damn sometimes characters not communicating makes me almost have brain aneurisms sometimes.

lorynkate's review against another edition

3.0

medium-paced

Plot or Character Driven: Character

Strong character development: Complicated

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: No

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

wannabe_lee's review against another edition

2.5

Very kiddy. Sounds like something that was written on Wattpad, and has an air of inexperience in life and understanding emotions. Characters reactions are extremely unbelievable in many situations, and the way that they act/the things they say (

especially with Karen’s mother

and strangers that just start cheering/clapping at things the main characters do in the duration of the book) are so extremely unrealistic that it seems out of a children’s book.

Characters automatically know whatever the author wants them to, (or must all be masterminds in understanding things) as seen when

Clive Perry is speaking with Luke and mentions he earns his money through “other things” and Luke immediately understands that it means adult films with children. Also when Luke has his flashback to when Harper was asking to “talk about something important” and he automatically makes the connection to her abuser? Like it could have been about so many other things, such as your relationship that was currently falling apart

. This type of thing happens many times, yet the characters are very unreasonable and misunderstand everything when it is convenient for the storyline.

Everything also moves unreasonably fast in this book,

as Gloria and Aldo

get engaged within week of dating and

Harper and Luke

get engaged within physically seeing each other (not including long distance) for a month and a couple weeks (in which they were only officially dating for like a week or two).

Luke also proposes directly after the fight, which was resolved by him and his entire family singing cringy songs not even relating to the forgiveness he is supposedly asking her for.

It is always mentioned that Benevolence is such a small town, yet they always conveniently have everything they need there or nearby (furniture store, when

Luke supposedly bought the proposal ring locally,

ect).

Also disliked the comments made about “not angering women” and “never argue with your women if you want to be happy” that are used many times throughout the book. Also Harper’s horniness about everything got progressively more annoying throughout the book.

Overall Isn’t the worse book I’ve ever read, if read for ‘no plot just vibes’ (I’ve been in the trench’s with some books), and I normally do not care too much about plot holes; yet because of the fact that this author was hyped up so much by a friend it was just generally disappointing for it to be so tremendously average. Exudes Wattpad and inexperience in writing and in life, which can be a vibe sometimes, but I don’t believe it works at all in this book as it is “adult romance”.