3.31 AVERAGE

challenging medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
informative reflective tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
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rosalindpoet's review

3.0

decent concept but like. i dunno this is coming from such a specifically white cis heteronormative pov that it’s just kind of... tiring? like literally the only woman to talk is a secretary... even the protagonist’s wife doesn’t talk. i’m exhausted
emotional reflective

aido_potato's review

3.0

A really solid short story, but nothing exceptional. I think it goes great with the collection, but doesn’t rise above the rest in any way.
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dragonflymorning's review

3.0

Bit of a quick Gattaca remix. Not stunning, but very twisty and thoughtful for so few pages.
challenging emotional reflective fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
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issymaae's review

3.0
dark emotional mysterious reflective fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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smsienk's review

1.0

I don’t get it.

I didn’t realize it when I came to the end. I felt out of sync of this story the entire time, and I still don’t get the point now. The dialogue often didn’t seem to make sense, the plot seemed unfinished, and it’s literally almost all male characters. I think a female character speaks once or twice. Wouldn’t recommend.