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I found a lot of the concepts in this book really interesting, like the eugenics-based dystopian caste system. It really leans into the sci-fi aspect, which is able to take it to quite an extreme
The Hunger Games-style battle royale was also interesting, with a lot of shifting alliances and politicking. I also appreciated that Darrow fell to a real nadir due to his mistakes and learned from them. I think that's what had me riveted in the latter part of the book, since I was invested in seeing how he would succeed.
I also found myself really interested in the side characters, namely Servo and Mustang. Though I did predict the twist that
That said, this book started with one of the most egregious examples of fridging I've read in my life. And the book calls back to it constantly. I nearly stopped reading after it happened because I really just wished I could read an alternative version of the book where
The treatment of the female characters in this book in general is not great. While many of them are capable in a variety of ways, many also get used as objects on which male characters act, effectively to show how monstrous and awful those male characters are. Then in certain cases, it feels almost forgiven
Also, everyone is so goddamn young! Maybe I'm just getting "old" (I'm not even old) but I'm tired of teenage or young adult protagonists. It makes sense in the context of the world, but I just decided to age everyone up 4 years in my head.
All in all, I'm planning to continue with the series. From what I've read of other reviews, it seems some of my issues with this book may improve over the course of the series, so I'll give it a chance. And I'd be lying if I said I weren't invested in the story to come.
Graphic: Death, Violence, Blood, War, Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Grief
Minor: Death of parent
I was also surprised to see that about 50% of reviewers on here marked the book “diverse.” Does it count if the only described differences are hair and eye color? And we spend the vast majority of the book with only the blondes? There are also zero queer characters (and a fair few homophobic jokes to boot).
I have read in other reviews, however, that some of the issues of the first book improve in the rest of the series. It really can be hard to judge systemic issues based on just the first part, as it is always possible that the sexism/homophobia/etc are in there to show progression throughout the series. Maybe it’s so bad in the first book bc Darrow doesn’t know better yet, but he learns, you know? I do think first installments owe us a little more hints towards that end so we don’t commit to series that will ultimately disappoint us, but it is what it is.
I do think I’ll give book 2 the benefit of the doubt, based on what I’ve heard from people who have finished the whole series.
Graphic: Misogyny, Slavery, Violence, Murder
Moderate: Rape, Sexual assault
Minor: Homophobia
Graphic: Death, Misogyny, Slavery, Suicide, Violence, Forced institutionalization, Colonisation, War, Classism
I’m glad people love this series, but not for me, I’m afraid.
Graphic: Alcoholism, Cursing, Death, Genocide, Gore, Hate crime, Misogyny, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Forced institutionalization, Blood, Police brutality, Grief, Murder, Colonisation, War, Injury/Injury detail
The premise had potential, and I liked Pax
Now everything I didn't like:
- Darrow is a Gary Stu, and he knows and is proud of it. He’s constantly bragging about his abilities, looks, smarts, etc.
- He’s always going on about how hot and how much he loves his fourteen-year-old wife.
- There is so much misogyny in this book:
- The use of rape and sexual assault as motivation/anger fuel for Darrow and the other men
- The way said rape and sexual assault was handled by Darrow
(i.e. bringing it to the attention of everyone, and pulling Nyla into the spotlight to do it) Trying to justify Titus raping everyone because he had to watch someone he loved get raped?????? Everyone just forgives Tactus for it because he received a punishment????? - Using “like a girl” as an insult
Since Mustang is female, and not the ArchGovernor’s son, the Proctors were absolutely ok with kidnapping, poisoning, etc. They only cared about his son, not his daughter - Gold women are still weak and oppressed by men
- He sees himself as some god come from on high to save everyone because he knows hardship, so he’s automatically better than everyone
- So many made-up words with no explanation or even context at some times
- Does the author have a piss kink?
- There’s an entire race of people that are literally just sex slaves, and it’s fine and ok?? Darrow gets mad at the rape and sexual assault of Golds, but if it’s a Pink, it’s ok???
- He was chosen to help fight (and represent) a cause he didn’t even agree with and comes out believing he’s humanity’s last hope
- He’s never been educated, yet he’s the most intelligent person of the 1200 students chosen for the Institute because he has street smarts
- He “learns quickly” how to swim and has zero problem
- The Golds in the Institute are all boys/girls/children because they haven’t faced true hardship, even at the end of the book, when, I’m pretty sure they all endured the same thing. All Reds are men and women, even if they’re only fourteen
- Everyone idolizes him??? How does no one hate his guts????
- The narration said “drunker than Narol on Yuletide” twice in as many pages
- Pacing was bad: some things went on forever, and others were two sentences even though it was a decent chunk of time
- Eo was a “martyr,” but they kill Reds all the time, and no one of import really noticed.
Mustang only noticed the song, and she could barely remember it or the context (she said she heard it on the HC) - He finally learns what justice is, but as soon as something bad happens, he goes right back into vengeance mode
- So many “important” characters died off-screen without explanation
- Darrow forgot about his cause and his wife so many times just to talk about how great he is and how much he wants to win and shove it in the Golds’ faces
- No emotional depth; I had no emotional stakes, and didn’t care for any of the characters
Was Mustang being the Jackal’s sister supposed to be a twist??? - It was all tell and no show
- The author is (or was trying to make Darrow) an edgelord. It comes off so strongly in the writing
- The book is supposed to be about freeing the oppressed and standing up to the authority, but it’s actually about Darrow being super cool and smart and handsome and strong
- There is no hook in this story. The only reason I kept reading it was because I had to. I wanted to put it down after the first few pages, and it did not get better
- Short sentences. Only short sentences. No rhythm
- The Greek/Latin stuff is really overdone
Darrow thinks Mustang betrayed him just because he found out she was the Jackal’s brother, but when she actually betrays her brother, it’s all good. She’s not even mad at him for doubting her Darrow doesn’t struggle at all in adapting to life as a Gold (because when he was a Red, he already thought he was all that) - How many times does the word “slave” need to be said? Casually referring to his peers as slaves as if that’s a normal thing to do
- They were told ideally they wouldn’t kill each other, but they all took that to mean battle to the death
Titus being a Red was never touched upon again. Darrow just accepts the fact and moves on once he’s dead - All “plot twists”
(i.e. Titus beind Red, Mustang being Jackal’s sister) weren’t unexpected because we knew next to nothing about either characterWe knew Titus was cruel and angry We knew Mustang was weak because she’s a woman, but if she was a man, she’d be a great leader
- A lot of chunks like “this happened to this House. This happened to these people.” Telling the reader what happened instead of us reading it for ourselves
Darrow finds out Mustang (the girl he fell in love with after his wife died, and he tried to kill himself over) is the ArchGovernor’s daughter (the man who ordered his wife dead), and he suddenly thought that Mustang is the ArchGovernor, and she wanted Eo to die - I don’t know what anyone looked like other than:
- Darrow is oh-so handsome
- Cassius looks like a god
- Pax is a titan
- Sevro is short
- Mustang is beautiful and also short
- Eo is pretty and has red hair
- Mars Proctor looks like an old war general guy?
Graphic: Death, Slavery, Murder, War
Moderate: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Cursing, Gore, Homophobia, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Racial slurs, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, Blood, Police brutality, Kidnapping, Grief, Cannibalism, Medical trauma, Death of parent, Sexual harassment, Injury/Injury detail, Classism
Minor: Addiction, Alcohol
Graphic: Bullying, Death, Gore, Violence, Murder, Classism
Moderate: Misogyny, Rape, Torture, Cannibalism
Graphic: Body horror, Death, Gore, Misogyny, Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, Medical content, Grief, Medical trauma, Murder, Toxic friendship, Colonisation, War, Injury/Injury detail, Classism
Moderate: Alcoholism, Animal death, Cursing, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, Excrement, Death of parent, Alcohol
Minor: Confinement, Vomit, Trafficking, Cannibalism
Plot-wise, I found the first half just plain boring. There were way too many infodumps and I didn’t care that much about the info because I wasn’t invested in any characters yet. The worldbuilding itself was simplistic to the point that it felt like a middle-schooler wrote it. (The classes/job sectors in society are named after colors, and the golds rule at the top, for example.) The characters were also lacking nuance, typically falling into either the good guy group or the bad guy group. The bad guys were just stereotypical bad guys with no gray area, which is something I have less and less patience for in my reading. Darrow, the main character, was bland beyond his rage and anything we saw of his development was told to us rather than really shown. Finally, the “woman in the fridge” trope was used which left a sour taste, especially because it was super obvious to see coming and again corny. I will say the last 25% improved, both in the writing and plot. I hear that this book is the weakest in the series, so I will give the second book a shot before giving up altogether since it is so well-loved.
Graphic: Child death, Death, Gore, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Blood, Murder, Sexual harassment, War, Injury/Injury detail, Classism
Moderate: Excrement, Grief, Death of parent
Minor: Sexual content, Cannibalism
Graphic: Body shaming, Death, Gore, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Grief, Murder, War, Classism
Moderate: Animal death, Rape, Blood, Excrement, Cannibalism, Death of parent, Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Alcohol
Moderate: Child death, Homophobia, Misogyny, Racism, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Slavery, Murder