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I don’t know why I thought at the beginning that I wouldn’t give this book 5 stars
I expected a cute funny little romance story buuut it had so much more depth and I loved that. I was giggling, kicking my feet, holding back tears and the last few pages ripped. my. heart. out.

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funny hopeful lighthearted medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.25

It was easy to get into, and very feel-good. It didn’t feel too repetitive even though they went through the same day for a month, and I liked that

you could see the characters develop while things around them stayed the same. It was interesting to see how many different outcomes were possible by changing just one small thing, and I liked that you got to see how many things happen throughout a day, that we don’t get to see, because we are focused on something else. I am so confused about the librarian being stuck in the loop as well, and wish we had learned more about her. It was also a bit too easy that Miles only forgot about her for a day and a half.

I found myself skipping a lot of the time, because it was discribing unimportant information, and I feel like many sentences could have been shortened. All in all, a good read, but it didn’t stick out to me, so I will likely not remember most of it.

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adventurous challenging funny hopeful mysterious tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

Barrett Bloom is a disaster on two legs. After a horrible final year of high school, her first day of college ends with her accidentally setting a frat house on fire.

There's the big bronze W that stands for What Did You Just Do? and Who Are You Trying to Fool? and Why Did You Think College Would Be Any Different?

But the next morning, Barrett wakes up... and it's the first day of college again. She's trapped in a time loop.

Soon she discovers that fellow student Miles is also trapped in the loop. Unfortunately, he's a fussy, reserved, rigid nerd who lectures her about physics in an infuriatingly pompous tone. Can Barrett deal with Miles long enough to free them both from the loop?

The book's blurb is unusual, as it spoils three major events: (a) there's a time loop, (b) Miles is trapped as well, and (c) there's a romance.

Although I imagine this wasn't an easy choice for the author to make, I think this was a great idea because it clearly explains the genre of the book, i.e. it is a romance with a sci-fi angle.

This is also the first book I've read with an explicitly Jewish American protagonist. This was quite cool and I liked how the Jewish characters were portrayed, including not only the religous aspects of Judaism (e.g. Shabbat) but also the ethnic and cultural ones (e.g. the protagonist's Big Jewish Hair and fondness for New York bagels).

In general, Barrett was extremely likeable as a protagonist. Her snarky tendencies were softened by her endearing determination to help her mother and other people affected by the time loop. I also liked how she was genre-savvy and considered how time loops work in fiction.

The romance was absolutely adorable. The development of the main characters' relationship seemed very natural and believable.

However I did think it was a little too convenient that Miles turned out to be

a Nice Jewish ~~Doctor~~ Physicist, when only 5% of UWashington students are Jewish and the random chance of Barrett being stuck with another Jew would be low

. I think this could have been lampshaded with some comments like "Wow, fancy that, what are the odds?".

The plot and pacing are great. I was impressed at how the author created a sense of momentum and plot advancement despite the looping structure. This seems to have been achieved by having the characters work their way through phases of emotion mapping to the Hero's Journey, e.g.

New Allies and Enemies (meeting Lucie and Miles), Fun and Games (trying to fulfill all their dreams), the Abyss (getting revenge on Cole leaves Barrett feeling worse than ever), Transformation (changing goals to look for the time travel professor), etc

I also liked how various themes and symbols were woven into the story. Barrett's fight to escape the time loop mirrors her fight to move past the horrible events of her highschool years, which still appear to her in flashbacks.

One improvement I would suggest to the story is to make the time loop mechanic more believable:

The idea that going down into a basement increased the gravitational pull on the protagonists in any significant way is not believable. They probably would have experienced bigger gravity differences simply by travelling around in the way they did (going to different cities, places that would have been closer to sea level, etc).
This gravity-based gimmick is also unconnected to the way the protagonists got stuck in the first place (which seems to have nothing to do with altitude).
I agree with the choice to make the method unrelated to emotion/character development/etc, as otherwise the rest of the plot wouldn't make sense. It just needed to be something that would be impossible to do by accident, e.g. performing some high-powered physics procedure in the university labs, instead of just descending to a certain altitude.

Overall, I had a blast reading the book and enjoyed the whole thing. I would definitely recommend it.

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